SOBS DESSY I DO NOT DESERVE THAT MENTION IN YOUR A/N AND LIES OKAY THIS FIC WAS BRILLIANT EVEN WHEN YOU SENT IT TO ME ;A;
sobs but bb i really, really did love this fic! ;_______; even while i was beta-ing, making corrections and focusing more on the grammar and structure instead of the story, i could still feel the sorrow and pain of the story and it was just so heartbreaking. there was a point where i had to stop and breathe for a moment; i was so close to crying and shasdkjhasjdksa this fic is wonderful, really.
i absolutely adore the way you wrote both howon and dongwoo, about how this story is precisely that - this story is howon and dongwoo. the story of their lives, dreams, love. dongwoo just gives and gives and gives and doesn't know how to receive, and so does howon, and the lack of receiving somehow materializes into love and it's so beautiful ♥
but the thing i liked most about this, the most wonderful thing about this entire story is how realistic it is. howon and dongwoo are both living each and every single day like it's going to be their last (because it might be and no one ever really knows), clinging onto the only thing they really know (or rather, want to know) - love. that's how it is in real life too, isn't it? although i loved your characterization of howon and dongwoo separately, the most wonderful parts are when they're together; you've really, really convinced me that they love each other more than anything, because when they're not together, even the words feel empty, like it's just not complete. and the way you wrote how dongwoo knew it was coming just as much as howon did, but roles were reversed in the sense that he was more prepared for it than howon, that was just so, so beautiful. how he took risks and wanted to do everything before he passes, and how he did get to do everything... except that last one on the list. ;_________________;
s-sobs i know i was pretty much just rambling and being really analysis-y up there, but i just want you to know that this fic moved me to tears, and i loved this so, so much ♥ memming this for future reading and hasdjhsajkdhsajd THIS WAS WONDERFUL OKAY Q_____Q
YOUR ARGUMENTS ABOUT BEING A FAIL WRITER ARE INVALID ;A;
sobs but bb i really, really did love this fic! ;_______; even while i was beta-ing, making corrections and focusing more on the grammar and structure instead of the story, i could still feel the sorrow and pain of the story and it was just so heartbreaking. there was a point where i had to stop and breathe for a moment; i was so close to crying and shasdkjhasjdksa this fic is wonderful, really.
i absolutely adore the way you wrote both howon and dongwoo, about how this story is precisely that - this story is howon and dongwoo. the story of their lives, dreams, love. dongwoo just gives and gives and gives and doesn't know how to receive, and so does howon, and the lack of receiving somehow materializes into love and it's so beautiful ♥
but the thing i liked most about this, the most wonderful thing about this entire story is how realistic it is. howon and dongwoo are both living each and every single day like it's going to be their last (because it might be and no one ever really knows), clinging onto the only thing they really know (or rather, want to know) - love. that's how it is in real life too, isn't it? although i loved your characterization of howon and dongwoo separately, the most wonderful parts are when they're together; you've really, really convinced me that they love each other more than anything, because when they're not together, even the words feel empty, like it's just not complete. and the way you wrote how dongwoo knew it was coming just as much as howon did, but roles were reversed in the sense that he was more prepared for it than howon, that was just so, so beautiful. how he took risks and wanted to do everything before he passes, and how he did get to do everything... except that last one on the list. ;_________________;
s-sobs i know i was pretty much just rambling and being really analysis-y up there, but i just want you to know that this fic moved me to tears, and i loved this so, so much ♥ memming this for future reading and hasdjhsajkdhsajd THIS WAS WONDERFUL OKAY Q_____Q
YOUR ARGUMENTS ABOUT BEING A FAIL WRITER ARE INVALID ;A;
Reply
Leave a comment