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Jan 15, 2012 10:08

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darkensunrise January 15 2012, 19:45:19 UTC
I LOVED this. I really love the way you write them and I liked the fact that Villa was so quiet and secluded from Silva, but then started to open up to him more and more. I always love a good roommate AU :)

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brojan January 18 2012, 02:32:09 UTC
thank you for reading/commenting! i'm glad you liked it

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meretricula January 15 2012, 19:53:31 UTC
reading this made me so happy. I just want to curl up and wallow in it for a while. slow-building romance, sighhhh. perfect. and Xavi and Cesc and Daniella and Cynthia and everything, really. just... happy-making. ♥

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brojan January 18 2012, 02:32:33 UTC
:) thank you dear!

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wh_mermaid January 15 2012, 20:10:54 UTC
“Like a butterfly coming out of it’s cocoon and spreading its wings. Fly free, Silva!”

Dying. Mwuahahahahahahahaha perfection

"Both of you shut up," he says good naturedly, "I will be scoring the goals this season," and everyone laughs because Raul's one of their only players tall enough to play defense.

Raul!!!!!!!!! <3____________<3 I get inexplicable excited when he shows up in fic so basically this fic is flawless just for including him

The TV is off and there's a blanket Silva's never seen before tucked around his shoulders.

Villa, you shy/anti-social/whatever/beautiful motherfucker <3____<3

When Silva gets home from class on Tuesday, there's a vase on the counter with fresh flowers. Violets. It’s the first time he starts to associate Villa with home.

:*333 omg this part is just so lovely and heartbreaking, yet uplifting at the same time. *flails*

“Enjoy it,” he calls, leaving the room. “I’m not hungry anymore.”

This entire scene is so sad and heartbreaking. Why why why???? ;______;

Eventually he smiles to himself, ( ... )

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brojan January 18 2012, 02:33:23 UTC
lol i love this comment. i'm glad you liked it and thank you!

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pronoe January 15 2012, 20:12:58 UTC
I just... I love this so much. I can't even write a proper comment right now, I just LOVE it so much.

Their relationship at the beginning is just so practically non-existant, but it's already there, somehow. And the violets. And the ashtray. The note made me laugh. :)

My favorite phrase was probably the “Eat,” he says. “I’ll-I’ll still be here. When you’re done.”. I don't know why, but I just had a huuuge smile on my face when I read it. Maybe it was the whole scene, it seems so perfect to me...

I love it. A lot. ♥

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brojan January 18 2012, 02:33:57 UTC
thank you for reading and the lovely comment! and aww your icon, too cuuuuute

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brojan January 18 2012, 02:35:25 UTC
you're damn right about xavi/villa! haha. thank you lady, i'm glad you liked it even if silva/villa isn't your thing

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