that was so sweet :) there just isn't enough pipita/leo out there.
Ángel's comment made me laugh, I can totally picture him writing that.
But Eze isn’t here. Gonzalo thinks of calling him, but it’s late in Portugal and Eze has a different life now, maybe. One without Gonzalo, at least. This part made me so sad :( Ezequiel and Gonzalo had such a cute bromance.
I love how this fic is about little moments and details but how they piece together into such loveliness. (then again, it is you...)
ack! mini tiny angel cameo! i fucking love angel /irrelevant comment
but his smile is so wide Gonzalo doesn’t really care what the ball says, because he’ll remember that more than anything. ugh this is just perfect. i love how pipita's ~longing is there, even before he really realizes what it is.
But Eze isn’t here. Gonzalo thinks of calling him, but it’s late in Portugal and Eze has a different life now, maybe. One without Gonzalo, at least. no, seriously, just stomp all over my already broken heart. go right ahead.
But he only lets himself reach out and lay a hand across Leo's back, fingers notching between the ridges of his spine. Leo just lays his head down on his hands on the floor and they stay there, still and quiet. i just love the words you chose for this. love it. the ridges of his spine. ahhhh perfecto
( ... )
It's already kinda mentioned above but your details. Your. Details. Eze, the injury last year, Angel, the captaincy, and to doughnuts. It's just so wonderful how you all manage to sew it altogether that flows so naturally. I love this.
Comments 5
Ángel's comment made me laugh, I can totally picture him writing that.
But Eze isn’t here. Gonzalo thinks of calling him, but it’s late in Portugal and Eze has a different life now, maybe. One without Gonzalo, at least. This part made me so sad :( Ezequiel and Gonzalo had such a cute bromance.
I love how this fic is about little moments and details but how they piece together into such loveliness. (then again, it is you...)
Reply
ack! mini tiny angel cameo! i fucking love angel /irrelevant comment
but his smile is so wide Gonzalo doesn’t really care what the ball says, because he’ll remember that more than anything. ugh this is just perfect. i love how pipita's ~longing is there, even before he really realizes what it is.
But Eze isn’t here. Gonzalo thinks of calling him, but it’s late in Portugal and Eze has a different life now, maybe. One without Gonzalo, at least. no, seriously, just stomp all over my already broken heart. go right ahead.
But he only lets himself reach out and lay a hand across Leo's back, fingers notching between the ridges of his spine. Leo just lays his head down on his hands on the floor and they stay there, still and quiet. i just love the words you chose for this. love it. the ridges of his spine. ahhhh perfecto ( ... )
Reply
your leo is the greatest thing ever
jsyk
it's so lovely and a tiny bit sad, every little observation pipita makes about leo reminds him he doesn't really know him much at all
Reply
Thanks for posting this! I really like your Messi :) I hope you write a sequel :)
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment