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Over My Head (My Confessions)

Jul 01, 2012 10:58

Over My Head (My Confessions)

Tagline: Everyone knows I'm in over my head and I don't know what to do to but to give my confessions.

Summary: When the pressures of being unable to conceive slowly derails their relationship, Arizona chooses to take a break. She heads to Africa to work as a missionary, saving lives of the tiny humans. Yet, little to ( Read more... )

fic: over my head, fic: callie/arizona, over my head (my confessions), fic: grey's anatomy

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brittlovesher July 1 2012, 15:45:37 UTC

Haha, indeed, a very filled chapter with lots of stuff going on! I warned you that the Dani thing wasn't quite over. Haha. She's still a pivotal character even though we haven't really seen her yet. It should have been Callie, Callie should have rescued her, but she has her now, and their story is beginning to work itself out. :D

majincammy July 1 2012, 15:36:34 UTC

Ugh, YOU!

Seriously? Seriously. Seriously!

This chapter was heartbreaking, from Callie's thoughts, the amnesia, Derek's awesome hair, all the way through Arizona's heartwarming speech about wanting to remember Callie... My heart just bleeds with feels!

I find it ironic that Derek is the one giving Callie hope and wrangling Callie's thoughts before they really spiraled out of control. The flashback was perfectly placed, it's nice to get glimpses of what Arizona went through during the crash and it's nice to see how brave Dani was during the crash. So well done.

Your writing is as amazing as ever. That scene with Arizona telling Callie that she wants to remember her and how she says "You look at me like I am everything to you." UGH!! You're totally killing me. I am dead. Please revive me for the next chapter (which you best be postin' soon!).

brittlovesher July 1 2012, 15:48:38 UTC

It still amuses me that you and I have pretty much the same icon. It's kinda awesome.

Nevertheless, so glad you liked the chapter. I'll let you in on a secret, I do too. A lot actually. This is probably my favorite one. Shh. Don't tell. Callie's character is growing, as is Arizona's. Oh and the Derek thing, I love it for a very important reason, Derek is such a parallel to the Calzona relationship, I don't know if you've picked up on it yet or not, but his story with Meredith is very similar, he's the parallel of Callie, so it's nice to introduce them in a scene like that.

I am so glad you enjoyed this. Arizona's amnesia is common but a road block for Calzona, I think. I loved her scene with Callie, it really moved me as I was writing it. She wants to remember that love, but will she remember the bad stuff too? Time will tell.

Aha, you know I can't post for like, a week or two. But maybe, since it's summer, and I'm in a writing mode, I'll get it up soon. ;)

ecki_81 July 1 2012, 18:31:46 UTC

First off sorry for being MIA. Life is absolutely crazy right now.
But today I finally had time to catch up on the last chapters and I am kinda happy that I didn't have to go through 2 weeks without updates especially after the last one. With the one today I can happily wait another 2 weeks :) Am just curious what happened to Dani and how Arizona will react to it.
Anyways as usual great work and thanks for taking my mind off all the stuff going on around me by providing such a lovely story :)

brittlovesher July 2 2012, 11:38:05 UTC

Hey stranger!

I totally understand about life being insane, I am going to message you later on today and try to catch up with you, because I definitely miss you!
I am so glad that you got to catch up with this fic and that you liked this chapter. All will be resolved about Dani in the next upcoming two chapters, I think. And it's a turning point for Calzona so I'm super stoked for it!
Aw, well you know that I love to write and distraction is what I am painfully good at. Haha. Can't wait to talk to you soon! :)

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brittlovesher July 2 2012, 11:38:40 UTC

Awesome! I am super happy that you did! :D Definitely a lot of emotion, but they are gonna power through it, like always!

funkyshaz57 July 1 2012, 22:48:46 UTC

Another really good chapter, TBH I wasn't expecting the Amnesia thing, I was really hoping you wouldn't go down that path only for the fact that it delays what I've been waiting for since the start of the story, frustrating LOL, but at the same time I like that you have Arizona recognize something in Callie's eyes that makes her know that Callie is something to her ( ... )

brittlovesher July 3 2012, 19:36:39 UTC

Haha, I am sorry! But I did go down that path! It has it's rewards though, I promise. It's going to be worth it. Just because Arizona's memory isn't there right now doesn't mean that it is not going to return soon ( ... )