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majincammy March 25 2012, 22:54:45 UTC
More heartbreak here. I totally cried like a kid who just had some jerk steal her candy. lol Seriously. Loved Bailey talking to Teddy. Extremely in character and gave her the push she needed to do what needed to be done, despite how difficult it's going to be.

The flashback killed me. Arizona desperate to try and get back to where they once were and Callie clinging to the fact she doesn't want to sacrifice in such a way. The "I'm so sorry" and "Me too" were so heartbreaking. The pitter and patter of my heart were totally crying out for each of them.

And then Teddy going to talk to Callie and Callie is so blissfully unaware. I'm glad she got through it, but man, I cannot imagine that she has ever had to do something so difficult before in all her life.

Anyway, awesome chapter. This story just gets better and better. It's really amazing to read the emotions here, you've captured them so well. I'm totally in awe of you. Keep it up!

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Oh You! :) brittlovesher March 25 2012, 23:26:47 UTC
Awww you got me fan girling! I so did not mean to make you cry! *offers you a teddy bear* I loved the Bailey/Teddy interaction, I feel like Bailey would be the only one to hand Teddy her ass like that, because she puts other people first rather than just the situation ( ... )

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brittlovesher March 25 2012, 23:20:38 UTC
Hmm am I a week early? I thought it had been two weeks already! Maybe I am early, I don't know :P Either way, it is hereeeeeeee!

You're adorable for marking the days! That makes me feel so special!

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brittlovesher March 26 2012, 00:07:50 UTC
Hahaha, Well at least those two weeks went back quickly!

Ahhh, I am so excited for you to experience the reveal and Callie's em0tions. It's a powerhouse, one that is life changing for all characters.

Thank you so much for reading! :D

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brittlovesher March 25 2012, 23:21:40 UTC
You did? :( Would you like me to direct you to it? I neeeeeeeeeed you to be caught up! Because I love your reviews!

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funkyshaz57 March 25 2012, 23:27:18 UTC
As always so emotional, I'm surprised I've lasted this long to be honest, as great as this is it's just a whole heap of depressing beautiful yet heartbreaking words that with each chapter I feel like hope is being lost ( ... )

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brittlovesher March 25 2012, 23:40:34 UTC
I am so glad that you did last this long! As I was editing this chapter, I was actually thinking about you and how you're getting what you waited for, even if you have to wait a little longer for it. :)

There is a lot of focus on Teddy/Arizona but this is pretty much the last chapter of it for a while and the reason being is Teddy has this huge, huge backstory that involves Arizona but it's one that we have to wait till later in the story to find out. This is definitely a huge powerhouse for Callie/Arizona storyline! And their story really begins to take the reigns from this point forward ( ... )

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brittlovesher March 26 2012, 00:06:55 UTC
Bailey is all kinds of awesome.

You know, I have no idea. lol. I think two weeks is an appropriate time period, because Arizona kinda mentions they've been in the outs and avoiding each other and haven't been a couple for a while. So, it'd say about two weeks.

I did leave it there, I felt like it was a great way to get people to come back to next chapter. But I'm already in the great debate of posting early because it's the chapter of all chapters, the next one!

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brittlovesher March 26 2012, 00:25:19 UTC
lol it would totally suck if Arizona knew she was pregnant when she left so I had better be careful with that. Hmm but a good evil kind of thing. Hmm.. ;)

I think I probably will but this will be the only time that I do just simply because, like I said before, this will be the chapters of all chapters :)

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