LJ Idol Exhibit B: Week 1 - Intersection 'Chillin' Like A Villain.'

[bringing_words]

[This is an intersection for LJI Exhibit B: Week 1.  My intersection partner was the incredible witchdollie, whose entry is here. Entries can be read in either order.I can sense her vulnerability. She is like a painting which has been left in the rain, all the colours running together in a chaotic ensemble, nothing like the work the artist had in mind. Yet

Comments

[sweeny_todd]

The two pieces work really well together! I especially love the description of the painting!

[bringing_words]

Thank you! That particular line wrote itself :)

[medleymisty]

Ooooh. Neat little slice here. The Ringmaster scares me, but I can feel for him too.

[bringing_words]

Thank you :) Yes, the Ringmaster is a bit of a piece of work, but perhaps this person will be his undoing?

[witchdollie]

:D Im so proud of us. lol

[bringing_words]

:D Haha, me too!

[myrna_bird]

Aha! I had good instincts on what was to come from reading your partner's first. This is quite sinister and the metaphor is very effective. Nice job!

[bringing_words]

Thank you! It's very good to hear that the sinister aspect was in both piece :D

[adoptedwriter]

The ringmaster sounds evil. AW

[bringing_words]

Mmm. I'm not sure he can be trusted, that's for sure :)