Comment Fic A'hoy!

Nov 14, 2008 18:55

Raise your hand for Comment fic!

SO, here's the thing. I owe people fic, like whoa. To the point where these said people are gonna start de-friending me, I think. (And possibly chase me with pitchforks. Not because these people are mean or spiteful, it's just seriously been that long and, hey, nobody has that much patience.) And I'm sick and stuck ( Read more... )

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workswithwords November 15 2008, 03:48:16 UTC
Yay you're back!

Dean/Jo? Teenage au. :D

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brin_bailey November 15 2008, 05:26:54 UTC
Ick. This isn't what it should be, but like I said, the mojo, she is gone! Enjoy it anyway. :P ( ... )

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neuroticris November 15 2008, 06:22:22 UTC
Ooh, me likey! This shortie actually made me smile. So Dean/Jo. :D

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neuroticris November 15 2008, 06:56:32 UTC
okay - CHUCK

chuck/sarah

...Morgan interruptus...thanksgiving...grocery shopping

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brin_bailey November 15 2008, 21:41:48 UTC
Eep, this turned out kind of long. I'll have to do it in two posts. Heh. (Also, while I totally love the show/fandom, I've never actually written Chuck fic before, so this is a first. Yay!)

Chuck curls his hand around Sarah’s, lightly pressing his thumb to her wrist. He quickly looks at her for approval, still not sure where exactly they land on the fake/real couple graph. He kissed her two weeks ago with his eyes closed tight, but then again, he kissed Jill last week with his eyes wide open. He’s kind of confused.

“Hey, uh,” he says, smiling and swinging their hands. “It’s a thing couples do, right? I mean, shopping and hand holding. At, uh, the same time. Right?”

Sarah smiles, sort of nods her head, and pats his arm. “It’s fine, Chuck.”

“Yeah, good. Okay.”

With his free hand he grabs a can of cranberry sauce off of the shelf and then looks back down at the grocery list that Ellie quickly scribbled out before she left for an emergency appendectomy this morning. At the bottom, in Awesome’s writing is: Dude, don’t forget the ( ... )

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brin_bailey November 15 2008, 21:41:59 UTC
“Morgan, what are you doing here ( ... )

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neuroticris November 16 2008, 07:09:19 UTC
:D Thanks so much! This was so good. Very sweet and very true to the coupling. I hope you decide to try your hand at some Chuck/Sarah fics in the future because for sure I'll be one of the first ones to read them.

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joans23 November 15 2008, 09:35:32 UTC
I'll play. But no pressure, if it doesn't want to come, it doesn't want to come.

Dean/Chloe. Substitutes and lost hopes.

:)

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brin_bailey November 15 2008, 20:38:43 UTC
*does not have a chloe icon* *is ashamed*

He picks you up in Kansas.

He rolls down the window and sticks half of his head out and tries not to cough on the smoke.

Need a ride?

You’re sitting on the side of the road somewhere in between Lawrence and Junction City. The car that you stole finally ran out of gas and he’s the only person you’ve seen for miles. He looks familiar, maybe like some jock football player you went to high school with, except that he’s kind of rough around the edges-already beaten by the road and by life.

You thought that maybe Superman would rescue you, because even though you like to think that you’re not the same girl who’s still in love with Clark Kent, really that’s all you are. But, you figure that a black car is close enough to a red cape, so you climb into his front seat and he smiles.

I used to live around here once, he says. Long time ago.

You look out the window and all you see is burnt black fields and smoke. You nod. Yeah, me too.You stand still under the too-cold spray of the showerhead ( ... )

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joans23 November 16 2008, 05:30:10 UTC
Perfect. P.E.R.F.E.C.T!! Thank you sooooo much!

*doesn't have Chloe icon either. THE SHAME!*

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brin_bailey November 16 2008, 21:24:42 UTC
Um, it a bit late. Sorry ( ... )

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