Let's take the boat out, wait until darkness

[brightlotusmoon]

Since my novel is saved to my Gmail account, I've been able to view it in HTML, which has been useful in showing me that it sucks. Seriously, it sucks. I think I shall be doing a huge amount of editing soon. It was begun by an innocent 20-year-old, so now I think it needs to be completely revised by a slightly more mature 27-year-old

Comments

[suzanna_o]

I could see you as the next Francesca Lia Block, writing urban fairytales. :)
I like the way you evoke the natural setting here.

[brightlotusmoon]

That's what I want; I'm hoping that as my writing evolves it will become more stylized in that fashion.

Nice

[xanateria]

Yup, you are your own worst critic. Cause I still think it's really good.

Re: Nice

[brightlotusmoon]

:D