All's Fair in Love and War; Ch. 2

[bressa621]

Title:All's Fair in Love and War (2/3)
Pairing: James/Lily, Snape/Lily
Rating: PG-13 (for one hot kiss and some cross-dressing)
Summary: Sirius thought it would be funny to tell Snape a little lie and see where it took him. Little did he know that some unexpected lines were about to be crossed. Naturally, as James' best friend, he has to do

Comments

[elle_s_shadow]

Haha, this was cute. The "are you a woman" line made me laugh.

Snape.. kissing... made me close my eyes and go "Ewwww, ew that is so squicky there ought to be a warning label." :P

[bressa621]

Definitely not the best thing I've ever written, but, Lord, how I enjoyed doing it. This fic was a bit of a stepping stone for me - it helped me grow enough to be able to write more advanced pieces, like "Noble."

Aww, you just kinda have to realize that this Snape is a better guy already than the Snape we're familiar with. He's starting to look a bit healthier from spending time with Lily, and a bit happier, too. Maybe he's even washing his hair - who knows? And everyone deserves a first kiss, I think. Even weidos.

[writermerrin]

Aww, I think I'm actually glad I read this out of order because that kiss was just the sweetest part of the whole story.

[bressa621]

Thank you for taking the time to read this. Like I mentioned in my reply to elle_s_shadow, I've definitely written better works than this, but to hear that I at least got something right in this very early stage of my writing career makes me happy.