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Esclave (Chapter 12/13)

Aug 14, 2011 20:21

Title: Esclave (Chapter 11/13)
Author: keeconk
Pairing: AriYama.
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2,313
Disclaimer: None of these characters are mine and the story is solely fantasy, totally has nothing to do with the real life persons. Some facts, however, might be based on magazine translations.
Summary:Back in the mansion, and Yamada felt nothing but ( Read more... )

r: pg-13, !multi-chapter, *esclave, c: yamada ryosuke, g: hey!say!jump, p: ariyama, c: arioka daiki

Comments 32

daikishlicious August 14 2011, 13:33:16 UTC

/spots

daikishlicious August 14 2011, 14:07:51 UTC

Wow. I'm the first one. Yay. I'm so happy that you updated this fic. I miss reading this.

Its so cute when AriYama was still on the bed. Daiki's protective over Yamada. And Yamada sure loves Daiki's home.

I'll wait for the last chapter. <3

keeconk August 14 2011, 21:42:28 UTC

Yay for being the first one~ \o/

I'll try to do my best to update it. And thank you for reading! ♥

kusumi_koharu August 14 2011, 14:14:03 UTC

yayyyy this was nice to wake up to :D

This chpt was so cute <333
please hurry and write the last chpt <3333
I hope he stays with Daiki though...

keeconk August 14 2011, 21:44:40 UTC

XDDDD yay~

Thank you!!
Hahaha. I will try my best!
I hope work doesn't get too much in the way ♥

crazy_otaku911 August 14 2011, 21:25:23 UTC

... The dad reappears. O_O;;; Was not expecting that. Whoaaa. HOW CAN THIS HAPPEN RIGHT AT THE END? hahahahsldfjasdf.

keeconk August 14 2011, 21:45:24 UTC

Because I could not think of a better cliffhanger... /slapped forever/

nikasantos August 15 2011, 14:34:05 UTC

His da-da-dad?????wuahhhh!!!!!!
but still this is really cuteee (:
thanks for updating ne~

keeconk August 15 2011, 16:14:34 UTC

Thank you for reading!! :3

Sorry for the very late update OTZ

nikasantos August 15 2011, 19:31:30 UTC

its ok x2 (:
hmmmm I hope you update soon!!!! <3
will this have a prologue?

nikasantos August 31 2011, 19:08:24 UTC

hoo well just hope you update soon?

sugarwhales August 18 2011, 15:59:39 UTC

WHAT DO YOU MEAN HIS DAD. WHAT. I swear you come up with the most unexpected plot twists. (Though I guess that's the point.. whatever.) And this is .. chapter 12? Out of 13?

DOES THIS MEAN HIS DAD IS JUST THERE TO APPROVE OF ARIYAMA'S OBVIOUSLY-WILL-HAPPEN MARRIAGE?

If I say "I love anything Ariyama and anything they do on the bed is a bonus", is that justified as a review?

come here protective!Daiki let Ayumama give you a hug you cute little guy you omg

It's so nice to see the staff again. ~ Like Yamada said, it feels like home. ;3;

Thank you for fulfilling my daily need for happiness with your fic. ;w; I can't wait to see what comes next.

keeconk September 3 2011, 14:23:57 UTC

XDDD. I'm soooorrrrryyyyyyy (for both the twists and super late reply)

LOL. I'd take that as a review <3

I hope I can finish the last chapter soon, I'm still struggling with it orz