As the Hectic End of the Semester Draws to a Close

[brattibebe]

The immaculate alabaster comes, as is its way in December

Comments

[carbuncle22]

I love twinkly lights! So I agree with the poem. I don't know what Zion is, by the way. Or who. Yeah. But yay Vespers! And winter break. I'm so ready to be off of school for a month. Yesssss.

[brattibebe]

Oh man! I didn't pair "twinkle" and "lights" because I had used that verb already in the poem...but then I changed/switched it (I think it was something like "twinkling tree branches" instead of "the brilliance of bleached branches"). So now I could go back and allow the lights to twinkle again...hmm.

Zion is my church home! And I love it!

[raspberrydagger]

Nice poem!