Twilight Fic: Merit (A Change of Heart, Part 7)

[bratanimus]

Title: Merit (Part 7 of A Change of Heart)
Author: bratanimus
Rating: PG for this chapter, R for some others
Spoilers: This story, begun post-Eclipse, is my version of Breaking Dawn. First person Edward POV.
Warnings: Mild language, mild violence, references to sex.
Pairings: Edward/Bella, all other canon pairings
Word Count: 6,462
Summary: I had no idea

Comments

[duck_or_rabbit]

Dude! I'm not able to read tonight but ICU and it's awesome to have proof you're still writing.

I'm coming back here, don't worry.

[bratanimus]

Hey, hon! *hugs* See ya later. ;)

[scarlett71177]

GAH!

Gosh I just want to hug Edward. I love that he was right in the middle of this epiphany when Alice called. Oh, Edward!

I can't wait for the next chapter!!! This one was so vivid and had lovely details and imagery. <3

[bratanimus]

Hee hee, thank you, sweetie!! I appreciate your kind words, and am so glad you like all my little details. It only took me six months to get this chapter up, so perhaps the next one I can post within three months?? I'll be surprised if this story has any fans left at all, lol. Wish me luck. ;)

[scarlett71177]

love your icon!

The writing is rich without being purple- it's perfect!

Oh trust me, there's still lots of interest. I still see/hear it getting rec'd. <3

[bratanimus]

LOL, I love the icon, too. Thanks! :D

Oh, thank you, hon. That means a lot. I do strive not to be purply, so it's good to know you think I've been successful.

And thanks for letting me know that interest in this story is not dead. I'm going to finish it even if you're the only one who reads it, lol. ;)

[jenni_cn]

OMG!!! I'm so happy you are back to this!!!! I can't WAIT to read!!

Squeee!!!!

BTW, Did I tell you I just sent this to my MIL? She's a HUGE Twi-hard, too, and I only discovered that a couple of months ago! She was amazed to hear there is fanfic out there. Of course, I had to direct her straight to this one!! ♥

[bratanimus]

I'm happy you're happy! I'll look forward to hearing what you think. :D

You did tell me about your MIL and that you'd graciously rec'd my fic to her. Thank you again! ♥

[earendil_elven]

OMG woman I've missed your writing so much. XD YAAAAAAAAAAY!!!! :D

[bratanimus]

Thank you!! Good to see you. :D

[earendil_elven]

Can't wait for the next installment. :D

[bratanimus]

Let's see, chapter 6 was posted one year after chapter 5. Chapter 7 was posted six months after chapter 6. Maybe the next one will only take three months, lol. ;)

[kudosirony]

ZOMG UPDATE!

The cliffie...killing me! I'm glad we know where Bella is, but the fact the Volturi are waiting for Alice? Not good. And running won't do any good either. Eeeek!

[bratanimus]

Happy Birthday (early)!!! *hugs* :D

So sorry about the cliffhanger. *evil laugh* You're right, running won't help. I wonder if Alice will run or not? *maniacal laugh* And what's going to happen to Bella??? I guess I'll have to keep writing to find out. ;)

Thanks for reading. :D

Kudos

[kudosirony]

I just stumbled on this site and started reading and couldn't stop. Love the story from Edward's POV just as I did in reading the Midnight Sun draft.
I really enjoyed the different story line and the fact that it is written for a more adult audience. You take it the extra step I longed for in the books. ooh la la
And I agree, you are a better writer technically then Steph..sorry Steph.
Can't wait for chapter 8
Thanks- Psiri

Re: Kudos

[bratanimus]

Thank you very much! I'm so happy you stumbled upon my LJ and are enjoying this story. Thanks so much for taking the time to leave such thoughtful feedback! It's nice to know that you think Edward's voice rings true here (I loved Midnight Sun, too!), and very glad you like the plot. It's been fun writing this for a more adult audience, as well. ;)

I'll try to post chapter 8 as soon as possible! Thanks again for reading and for your lovely comments. :D