Twilight Fic: Merit (A Change of Heart, Part 7)

[bratanimus]

Title: Merit (Part 7 of A Change of Heart)
Author: bratanimus
Rating: PG for this chapter, R for some others
Spoilers: This story, begun post-Eclipse, is my version of Breaking Dawn. First person Edward POV.
Warnings: Mild language, mild violence, references to sex.
Pairings: Edward/Bella, all other canon pairings
Word Count: 6,462
Summary: I had no idea

Comments

[kudosirony]

ZOMG UPDATE!

The cliffie...killing me! I'm glad we know where Bella is, but the fact the Volturi are waiting for Alice? Not good. And running won't do any good either. Eeeek!

[bratanimus]

Happy Birthday (early)!!! *hugs* :D

So sorry about the cliffhanger. *evil laugh* You're right, running won't help. I wonder if Alice will run or not? *maniacal laugh* And what's going to happen to Bella??? I guess I'll have to keep writing to find out. ;)

Thanks for reading. :D

Kudos

[kudosirony]

I just stumbled on this site and started reading and couldn't stop. Love the story from Edward's POV just as I did in reading the Midnight Sun draft.
I really enjoyed the different story line and the fact that it is written for a more adult audience. You take it the extra step I longed for in the books. ooh la la
And I agree, you are a better writer technically then Steph..sorry Steph.
Can't wait for chapter 8
Thanks- Psiri

Re: Kudos

[bratanimus]

Thank you very much! I'm so happy you stumbled upon my LJ and are enjoying this story. Thanks so much for taking the time to leave such thoughtful feedback! It's nice to know that you think Edward's voice rings true here (I loved Midnight Sun, too!), and very glad you like the plot. It's been fun writing this for a more adult audience, as well. ;)

I'll try to post chapter 8 as soon as possible! Thanks again for reading and for your lovely comments. :D

[kudosirony]

Thanks!

I wonder how Bella's plan will work if Alice can't even get out of the airport without the Volturi waiting.

Not that she needs to tell me or anything. But if she does need someone to talk to, I will totally listen.

[bratanimus]

I wonder how Bella's plan will work if Alice can't even get out of the airport without the Volturi waiting.

*evil laugh again* >:o)

I can't reveal too much, of course, but I will remind you that Bella doesn't have Alice's gift of sight, so she wouldn't know if Alice were in danger ...

Not that she needs to tell me or anything. But if she does need someone to talk to, I will totally listen.

Silly Bella. She's never been one for opening up to people, has she? I'm working on her, though. ;)