Prompt fic: RAT (part 2)

[brassband777]

Prompt Fic: RAT

Title: ‘RAT’
Author: Brassband777
Characters: John, Sam (16), Dean (20)
Scenario: Teen!chester,  discipline fic
Implement: hand, paddle
Summary: Sam rebels against John’s rules and Dean is forced to rat on his brother.

Author's Notes/Warnings: Written for Jet’s twenty-five prompts. Prompt word: ‘RAT’. Warning: Parental spanking of a

Comments

[winchesterlove2]

AW THIS WAS GREAT! i love that John caved with tickets in the end lol

[brassband777]

I'm glad you liked it :) i couldn't resist doing that at the end. Hee hee....

[capricorn86]

This was amazing, very emotional!
I really felt bad for everyone here.. Dean, for being put through all that fear and stress by Sam, and having to rat out his brother.. Sam, for getting spanked so harshly, and John for having to punish Sam.
I love how Sam was only going to rebel if John wasn`t there to find out. Brilliant. XD
And the fact that John got tickets for the museum, aww! <3

[brassband777]

I'm actually relieved with how this story turned out in the end, because out of all of my fics, this one was the hardest to write. Yeah, I found it amusing that Sam would only rebel when he thought his dad wouldn't know - I figured he'd have more sense than to do it otherwise! Haha. I really needed the Dean/Sam reconciliation and comfort scene 'cause obviously I'm soppy that way ;) And you've left me blushing at the undeserved praise :D

[capricorn86]

Your writing always deserves praise, trust me. ;)
I have to say you have a great strength in portaying the relationshiå between the brothers so tenderly and beautifully.

[foxfire90]

Ok, so it's a feel bad all around for the Winchesters.

I know Dean was feeling sooo guilty for having to rat on Sam. I'm sure it went beyond his big brother insticts. BUT, I'm glad he did; Sam could've gotten hurt.

Poor Sam was just frustrated and of course he didn't show it correctly but we are talking about the Winchesters here.

And then John had to come home and punish Sam and then he just wanted to hold the kid.

Ah! Poor Sammy to have to wait while Dad went to get the paddle!

Good one, sweetheart :)

-Fox

[brassband777]

Thanks for reading and commenting - I like to know what other authors think. I figured when I wrote it that the hardest moment for Sam would be when he was left midway through the spanking when John went to get the paddle, but needed that to happen for Dean to come in. Thanks again :)

[atalantaj]

Good job. I'd say Sam definately deserved that spanking. I liked Dean trying to waive the part of the punishment that was for Sam disobeying him, sounds like something Dean would do. I liked John buying tickets to the museum also, and thought it was realistic about them living in a bad part of a town, don't think too many authors really mention that, but I imagine with their lifestyle that there were many times they weren't living somewhere safe. I'm glad Sam and Dean made up too. Thanks for sharing.

[brassband777]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) You're right, I bet they never lived in decent places considering they'd need really cheap rent etc. I also wanted Sam breaking curfew to be a really big deal, otherwise I felt Dean wouldn't tell on him if there was no risk to Sam and hence I focussed on the neighbourhood. Thanks for reading!

[ficwriterjet]

Thanks again for taking one of the prompts. :) I liked the way Dean gave Sam a bunch of chances to do the right thing before ratting him out to John. And I liked Dean trying to plead Sammy's case when John brought up the paddle. Nice story.

[brassband777]

Thanks :) And thank you for setting up the prompts. I did enjoy writing this, even though for some reason I found it incredibly difficult. I've also enjoyed reading the other Supernatural stories that have been written for the prompts so far as well :D