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brandywine421

ficspam.

Jan 15, 2006 15:14

This started out as my attempt at the latest fic writing prompt and turned into smut. AU because I haven't actually seen many of the scenes with this character so I took my own liberties with her. The first part above the *****'s is my attempt at the writing prompt, the rest is just my normal old stuff ( Read more... )

experimental, smut, ryan/taylor

Comments 36

katwoman76 January 15 2006, 20:33:01 UTC

Every story that has Ryan and Marissa apart and Ryan not wanting her back is a good story.
And by now, I like Taylor. (I just need to erase the fact from my memory, that she hooked up with the MeanDean.)

brandywine421 January 16 2006, 02:37:24 UTC

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!

arualms January 15 2006, 20:41:55 UTC

A Ryan/ Marissa break up, Ryan speaking his mind to Seth and The Hottness- great, as always.
The first experimental part was really interesting. Since Ryan is usually rather quiet, it seemed very in character.
His reasoning for going to Tyalor was good, too. The fact that he has no friends outside the foursome is just sad, I´m glad he is friends with Taylor now.
Neither one of them wanting any strings allowes for a relaxed feeling that Ryan usually doesn´t get to have.
Thanks for writing and posting this.

brandywine421 January 16 2006, 02:38:07 UTC

Thanks! I thought the prompt was pretty easy when it applied to Ryan because he doesnt talk that much anyway.

Thanks for reading!

elzed January 15 2006, 20:51:59 UTC

Oh joy! Marissa out on her ear, Ryan telling Seth and Summer to stop meddling, Taylor revealed as a nice girl, and HOTHOT smut? What's not to love!!!

Mwah!

elzed January 15 2006, 21:21:41 UTC

And, for what it's worth, I think you kind of nailed the silent partner talk (but then, with Ryan, it's not really a chore to have him not speak, eh?)...

brandywine421 January 16 2006, 02:38:42 UTC

Heh. You got me. This was an easy one to do the prompt for. Glad you liked the Ryan/Taylor twist.

finlee January 15 2006, 21:09:16 UTC

Cinnamongrrl and I have chatted about the show and we've often mentioned how we hate that Ryan has become a doormat.

This scenario would be great if it happened on the show (I love Taylor and all her hidden insecurities). Of course it won't because it's the "Marissa Cooper Show" and everything she does is easily forgiven because she just so awesome. Not.

Ryan and Taylor, that would be an interesting match-up. I could see her trying to coordinate their outfits and him teaching her how to change the oil and letting her wear his wristcuff and choker.

brandywine421 January 16 2006, 02:39:56 UTC

Glad you enjoyed! I really don't know much about Taylor since I'm not really watching the show much anymore but I know how much the flisters like her and she's cute.

Heh. Coordinated outfits would rock.

beachtree January 15 2006, 21:21:23 UTC

“My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.” Truer words have never been spoken! I just realized that I quote that all the time. What does that REALLY mean? I think I'd rather not know ( ... )

brandywine421 January 16 2006, 02:42:06 UTC

I thought this was going to somehow involve "M" and "J" and I couldn't believe you would do that I wouldn't do that to you unless one or both of them were going to die.

Glad you enjoyed!!