This started out as my attempt at the latest
fic writing prompt and turned into smut. AU because I haven't actually seen many of the scenes with this character so I took my own liberties with her. The first part above the *****'s is my attempt at the writing prompt, the rest is just my normal old stuff
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And Ryan/Taylor are an interesting pairing.
I like that you specified that they showered separately. You know if you hadn't, there would have been clamouring for that scene. *snerk*
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I love that Ryan no longer gives a shit about Marissa. He has his balls back!
Marissa ditching me is not a tragedy. Me staying with her for so long, that’s a tragedy.
Never a truer word.
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But my favorite part was this:"Her sidekick has a knitted case for it"
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This is a popular line lately, isn't it?!
Uh oh. I didn't steal it did I? Is that why it's on my mind, has it been in something else recently? *panics*
Glad you like the journal. It's...complicated and I finally just had to stop myself. I like your new one, a lot!!
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I think you did a really good job with the prompt -- I could *see* Ryan, with all those feelings bubbling under the surface, as Summer and Seth talked over his head.
And, um, the sex? She was hot.
She licks her lips and looks at me, her eyes glazed. “Is that how I taste?”
For some reason, that is the line that killed me dead. So awesome.
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