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Jan 15, 2006 15:14


This started out as my attempt at the latest fic writing prompt and turned into smut.  AU because I haven't actually seen many of the scenes with this character so I took my own liberties with her.  The first part above the *****'s is my attempt at the writing prompt, the rest is just my normal old stuff ( Read more... )

experimental, smut, ryan/taylor

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ctoan January 15 2006, 21:28:21 UTC
I thought you did a great job with the prompt. The first section has Ryan prominent, though he's not saying much. Stupid Seth and Summer, more concerned with their own agenda than what Ryan really wants. Good for him for going off on them. :)

And Ryan/Taylor are an interesting pairing.

I like that you specified that they showered separately. You know if you hadn't, there would have been clamouring for that scene. *snerk*

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brandywine421 January 16 2006, 02:42:57 UTC
I like that you specified that they showered separately. You know if you hadn't, there would have been clamouring for that scene. Exactly why I did it. Hee.

Glad you enjoyed!

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emrose33 January 15 2006, 22:41:50 UTC
Ooh, nice. You know, I could totally see something like this happening between them on the show. Well, without the hot, hot sex, of course. Even with the later timeslot. Hee.
I love that Ryan no longer gives a shit about Marissa. He has his balls back!
Marissa ditching me is not a tragedy. Me staying with her for so long, that’s a tragedy.
Never a truer word.

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brandywine421 January 16 2006, 02:43:28 UTC
He has his balls back! About time. Glad you enjoyed, emrose!

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zbyszko January 15 2006, 22:52:36 UTC
Ryan and Taylor make very nice friends.....

But my favorite part was this:"Her sidekick has a knitted case for it"

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brandywine421 January 16 2006, 02:44:19 UTC
Hee. I thought about having her knitting while they were watching the movie (yarn porn!) but this seemed better.

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brandywine421 January 16 2006, 02:46:49 UTC
My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.

This is a popular line lately, isn't it?!
Uh oh. I didn't steal it did I? Is that why it's on my mind, has it been in something else recently? *panics*

Glad you like the journal. It's...complicated and I finally just had to stop myself. I like your new one, a lot!!

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60schic January 16 2006, 05:27:29 UTC
Bwahahaha again! "Wuv, twu wuv" I can't believe this came up again. Good people all over my flist.

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overnighter January 16 2006, 01:04:12 UTC
I love you. I adore you. Ryan/Taylor is my secret OTP.

I think you did a really good job with the prompt -- I could *see* Ryan, with all those feelings bubbling under the surface, as Summer and Seth talked over his head.

And, um, the sex? She was hot.

She licks her lips and looks at me, her eyes glazed. “Is that how I taste?”

For some reason, that is the line that killed me dead. So awesome.

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brandywine421 January 16 2006, 02:51:11 UTC
Yay! Glad you enjoyed! Ryan/Taylor? Really? Glad the prompt part worked well. I almost wanted to do the sex scene, with Taylor saying lots of things and Ryan just kissing her, but...I went another way.

Glad you enjoyed!

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