Small Tents

[brainofck]

I am not happy with this. It was supposed to be light, funny and fluffy. But Jack started it off wrong, then Shau'ri got involved, and it all went to Hell. Oh, well. I might try revisiting it for fun and laughs another time

Comments

[chattycatsmeow]

Ooooh, I love the progession in this from "the best of a bad set of choices" to "This was what lovers did."

The last line is warm and sweet and wonderful.

[brainofck]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

[green_grrl]

*flaily hands* Love!

Ridiculously pleased with his realization, Daniel just smiled to himself and ignored the fact that his satisfied calm just made Jack more irritable.

I love a smug Daniel! Hee!

What a beautiful build from an almost incidental, "this is just for convenience" thing to the painful wrench of A Hundred Days/Shades of Grey. I love the way Daniel knew what was happening as it was happening, all along, but like a frog in boiling water, it was too late by the time he was in love. Yay for the happy ending, then!

[brainofck]

like a frog in boiling water

I got the worst visual off that... :D So pleased you liked it!

[green_grrl]

It is a really horrible metaphor, but you know what I mean!

[magnavox_23]

Cuddles ftw! I love the transition from bed buddies to something more, lovely. :)

[brainofck]

Thanks!

[melayneseahawk]

Lovely. *smiles dreamily* And a happy Valentine's Day to you, too.

[brainofck]

Thank you!

[discodiva76]

Oh I absolutely love the progression in this one......as someone has said before me, it's such a beautiful build up....thank you for a very nice post-Valentine's Day read....(time zones ya know? *winks*)....

Deeds xx

[brainofck]

Ah, time zones! So pleased you liked it!