Kings and Beggars of the World - Part 5

Jun 29, 2012 07:44


Title: Kings and Beggars of the World

Rating: NC-17

Author: braincloud2

Parings: Harry/Louis, ot5

Warnings: Sexual content, unexplained time-travel, and some offensive language.

Disclaimer: I don’t own. I don’t intend any offense. This is fiction.

Total Word Count: 25,000+

Summary: Harry’s on tour and he feels on top of the world-that is-until he wakes up ( Read more... )

one direction, wip, fic, ot5, harry/louis

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coffeebang June 29 2012, 01:01:59 UTC
I read the other 4 parts yesterday but I wasn't able to comment. I just wanted to say that I find the plot interesting and I can't wait to see where you'll take this story.

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braincloud2 June 29 2012, 13:28:06 UTC
Thank you :) It's a lot of fun to write so I'm really glad you like it~

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annon_of_rhi June 29 2012, 03:02:14 UTC
Yesssssss. I love this so much. I tried to put off reading it till I had a break at work, but I just couldn't. So I've been sitting at my desk trying to keep my face straight as I read it on my phone beside my keyboard and let me tell you, it is extremely hard to do! My face kept wanting to out into this huge gleeful grin. It's just so good!

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braincloud2 June 29 2012, 13:31:07 UTC
:D thank you! That makes me so happy <3 and I know that feeling very well, I have mastered the art of silent laughter in a library~

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allxs13 June 29 2012, 05:08:11 UTC
I never realized how much I wanted this until I started reading it. This story is all kinds of lovely :)

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braincloud2 July 2 2012, 04:55:29 UTC
Thank you so much! That's really nice of you to say :)

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thirstingdragon June 29 2012, 05:13:52 UTC
COME HERE AND LET ME CLIMB YOU LIKE A TREE AND LOVE YOU!!!
I have so many feelings that I feel like they are about to burst from my chest like a bad Alien remake. UHGGGG
The on again/off again nerves of making it through, Louis bringing up the incident to laugh at and then making things awkward, THE ICE CREAM! and the sexual tension. BEST BEST BEST. I can't wait to read more. Like I might die between now and next time you post.
It is killing me because I feel so many Harry/Louis vibes and now some major OT5 vibes on top of the ones from previous chapters. I JUST WANT THEM ALL TO GET NAKED AND COMFORT EACH OTHER WITH LOVE AND SEXYTIMES, OKAY?? *deep breaths*
Okay, but really, I can't wait for more and the last talk with Liam brings up so many thinky-thoughts that...yeah...this is awesome. <333333333333

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braincloud2 June 29 2012, 13:35:47 UTC
Yay! I love you haha~ God, thank you, seriously means the world to me that you like this XD I'll try not to take too long posting the next one, but it probably won't be till early next week <333

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nostravario June 29 2012, 06:57:46 UTC
A definite yes to the pet peeve, Louis’ eyes are amazing ( ... )

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braincloud2 June 29 2012, 14:11:56 UTC
Oh. My. God. I can't even-! sasdjkasjd!
Seriously, I was reading Harry/Zayn fic earlier and then I realised you'd left this giant-amazing-ass comment, and it made me so bloody giddy I couldn't even sit still!
I'm so glad you like the characterizations because this is the first story I've ever written that's driven more by the characters and drama than plot, and definitely my first dive into writing romance, so it absolutely means so much to me, that you like it. Bloody hell. You've given me so many ideas as well! So many things to think about~
Also, trying to control Louis' dialogue works as well as a bouncy ball made of jelly.
I may have laughed really hard when you said you have a crush on this fic XD Really, that is just too kind <333

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