Fic: Rainbow's Freedom (Shadow Of The Bat Arc) (3/35)

Aug 09, 2007 00:41

Title: Rainbow’s Freedom (Shadow Of The Bat Arc) (3/35)
Author: BradyGirl
Pairings/Characters: (this chapter): Clark/Bruce, Alfred
Series Notes: In the 23rd century, Earth is a technologically-advanced society that practices the ancient institution of slavery. The wealthy freeman Bruce Wayne acquires a highly-prized pleasure slave whom has fallen ( Read more... )

superman/batman, shadow of the bat arc, alfred pennyworth, clark kent/bruce wayne, rainbow's freedom

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batfan_sarah August 9 2007, 22:04:00 UTC
mrow!

poor clark, but the end was sweet and sexy :)

win!

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bradygirl_12 August 10 2007, 15:02:13 UTC
mrow!

poor clark, but the end was sweet and sexy :)

win!

Thank you, Sarah! :)

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enderwiggin24 August 9 2007, 22:21:53 UTC
grrrrrrrr, no one but bruce is allowed to hurt clark!!!!!! grrr *stabs carl and kicks him some more*

this was again a fantastic intense chapter!
it was worth all the waiting!

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bradygirl_12 August 10 2007, 15:11:27 UTC
grrrrrrrr, no one but bruce is allowed to hurt clark!!!!!! grrr *stabs carl and kicks him some more*

Exactly! A perfect distillation of this story's theme.

this was again a fantastic intense chapter!
it was worth all the waiting!

Thank you, Ender! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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jij August 11 2007, 00:06:24 UTC
Oh, you definitely satisfy the h/c junkie in me with this one!

Bruce’s touch was gentle, washing away the blood on Clark’s lip. He cleaned the scratches on his slave’s chest, getting out the healing cream. He applied it to the cuts, then bandaged the wounds. He checked the ribs, satisfied they weren’t broken, and wrapped them tightly.

*purrs* LOL, I almost find it hotter than the wonderful sex which follows. Almost. :) You make me want to write more h/c! Why do I have none on the docket right now! Or smut! *flails unhappily* I might just have to rely on you for them... :)

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bradygirl_12 August 12 2007, 01:03:54 UTC
Oh, you definitely satisfy the h/c junkie in me with this one!

After all, h/c luv is merely the forerunner to becoming a slash fan. ;)

Bruce’s touch was gentle, washing away the blood on Clark’s lip. He cleaned the scratches on his slave’s chest, getting out the healing cream. He applied it to the cuts, then bandaged the wounds. He checked the ribs, satisfied they weren’t broken, and wrapped them tightly.

*purrs* LOL, I almost find it hotter than the wonderful sex which follows. Almost. :) You make me want to write more h/c! Why do I have none on the docket right now! Or smut! *flails unhappily* I might just have to rely on you for them... :)

LOL! I'll be happy to fulfill your h/c cravings, m'dear! :)

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cavaleira August 13 2007, 05:59:00 UTC
Aww, poor Clark! That Carl guy better watch his back, you *do not* want to get on the Bat's bad side. But hopefully this incident will start to show Bruce that slavery = bad.

And the sex scene at the end was really intense, with all the power dynamics and roles at play. Nice chapter!

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bradygirl_12 August 13 2007, 16:23:41 UTC
Aww, poor Clark! That Carl guy better watch his back, you *do not* want to get on the Bat's bad side. But hopefully this incident will start to show Bruce that slavery = bad.

Time will tell! :)

And the sex scene at the end was really intense, with all the power dynamics and roles at play. Nice chapter!

Yes, it was a little tricky to write, so I'm glad it worked! :)

Glad you enjoyed the chapter, Cavaleira! :)

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starsandsea August 14 2007, 19:13:59 UTC
Once again, I'm finally commenting on this! LOL

*growls at the stupid, stupid man* *feels sorry for his girlfriend*

The cold metal of Clark’s manacles and collar burned against his skin. He was stunned at how quickly he had ended up in this mess. He wound up on the floor, gasping as he was kicked in the ribs.

*hugs Clark*

“You laid hands upon my slave.”

Oohhhh, Carl's in trouble now! Yay! LOL

Clark tried to ignore the throbbing in his eye. Maybe he should concentrate on his screaming ribs instead. Either way, he was in for a world of hurt.

*hugs Clark again*

Bruce held up his hand. “You will be paid. Your people have done their usual fine job. However, you will fire this…person…but give him proper references so that he will not go away with a feeling of…persecution.”

Heh heh heh.

I really liked the explanation of the 'Lord' part! :D

Please make me feel safe again.

*pets Clark*

Lovely as always! *runs to the next part*

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bradygirl_12 August 15 2007, 00:26:59 UTC
Clark tried to ignore the throbbing in his eye. Maybe he should concentrate on his screaming ribs instead. Either way, he was in for a world of hurt.

*hugs Clark again*

I really put him through the wringer on this one, didn't I?

I really liked the explanation of the 'Lord' part! :D

Yeah, I thought, why not really ratchet up Bruce's status? :)

Please make me feel safe again.

*pets Clark*

Lovely as always! *runs to the next part*

Bruce can make Clark feel very safe.

Glad you liked this, Star! :)

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