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anbyrobanby in br_votes

HOLY CRAP!!!

Oct 12, 2008 00:39

WELL.

Opened from here (but go use the character tabs if you need to read the other peoples cos damned if im linking it all >,>), this vote has four bits! :O

1) MEGUMI ETO ATTEMPTS ON YUKO SAKAKI

2) MAYUMI TENDO ATTEMPTS ON YUKO SAKAKI

3) YUKO SAKAKI ATTEMPTS ON MEGUMI ETO

4) YUKO SAKAKI ATTEMPTS ON MAYUMI TENDOThis might well be some sort of ( Read more... )

standard vote, result: kill, result: fail, multi-vote!, result: wound, v8, result: intercepted

Comments 8

Eto VS Sakaki - WOUND musicorgtfo October 12 2008, 00:59:57 UTC

(This is for either way around, Megumi attempting on Yuko, Yuko on Megumi, etc etc.)

Josh and Megumi - Okay, Josh has been one of the most consistent players in this entire version and just has post after post where he tries his best to expand on so much and that alone earns my respect. Megumi is adorable and the overall thoughts and actions reflect on how I think Megumi would act, IC and enjoyable for me. The writing ability is definitely flawed and it can be awkward to read, I mean, the ideas and happenings Josh posts are great but it's the overall writing ability which is a little tough to read, I can bare it but I feel it's something that is worth pointing out. All and all, Josh, awesome work!

Jen and Yuko - I've also enjoyed Yuko and I dig the writing. IC, the posts are kind of a short and sweet mix, like two quick but deadly punches from a boxer or something. There's been a post or two from you that I really love that really just impressed me. Keep up the great work ( ... )

Sakaki VS Tendo - KILL musicorgtfo October 12 2008, 01:26:15 UTC

Jen and Yuko - I've enjoyed Yuko and I dig the writing. IC, the posts are kind of a short and sweet mix, like two quick but deadly punches from a boxer or something. There's been a post or two from you that I really love that really just impressed me. Keep up the great work. (fuck yeah for copy pasting!)

Robert and Mayumi - There were bits I enjoyed, really enjoyed. The scenes with Akihiko and her was pretty sweet and cute, I thought, they were nice bits. I couldn't help but be kind of bothered with how Noriko was portrayed though, it really did not strike me as novel Noriko like to act so creepy and government fuck yeah! like, sorry. But, meh, it was like V8 Noriko, so it's okay then I'spose. :P

I think there's a slight edge that goes to Yuko due to the writing overall, the characterization was well done on Mayumi but the writing isn't quite as enjoyable for me as it was for Yuko. Sorry Robert, I'm voting KILL against Mayumi. Yuko killing Mayumi.

Good luck to both of you and great work! (:

my gosh :O Wound/Fail/Fail/Kill x_shinji_x October 12 2008, 11:06:51 UTC

blimey... the posts were very exciting to read... but my votes are as follows ( ... )

ABORT; FAIL; WOUND; KILL versipellis October 12 2008, 11:54:04 UTC

O-kay ( ... )

FAIL; WOUND; KILL sjorn October 12 2008, 17:49:57 UTC

Okaaay, this is going to be quick. I really don't have time, sorry guys. Firstly, Megumi. I mean, wow. Seriously, Josh, she has to be your best character so far. I love her, she just seems so... Megumi. You hitched onto the things that make her Megumi and expanded upon them; it's really great. However, your writing is still full with a few errors, which can take away from the flow of your writing, although, you seem to be cutting down on them now, so that's good!

The characterisation you've given her has been done really well, too. I enjoy the Shuuya/Megumi stuff, and I think it was done very realistic, etc. So, yeah. I'm sorry I can't expand on this, but I'm in a rush.

Mayumi next... I mean, I don't really know much about her. The writing is solid, I admit, but still... she's a little flat, I guess? I like the stuff that happened with her boyfriend... but, it was kind of unrealistic, I thought. That's just me, though. I mean... I didn't really get it. Not to mention - and I know this shouldn't be counted - that I don't think ( ... )