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Raiden vs. Taichi

Apr 30, 2008 21:40

http://community.livejournal.com/br_roleplay_2/209958.html

FIGHT TO THE DEATH~

Who lives, who dies? Raiden Shindou vs. Taichi Nawabe.

Votes are screened. Time is 9:40 PM eastern time. Go, go, go~

v7, fight to the death

Comments 5

Raiden wins cheesydorito May 1 2008, 02:50:41 UTC

Starting with Raiden, hoo. Writing ability is good. Like I’ve mentioned before, there are some grammar issues and stuff. I'm glad she's improving, but I'd still like to see her work on that particular aspect of her writing, because I think if she can tackle that, she'll really shine ( ... )

RAIDEN WINS sjorn May 1 2008, 14:17:32 UTC

I'm sorry if this vote is craptacular... I'm just not feeling so good, but I wanted to get a vote up. D:

Taiiichii. Okay. To be honest, not much happens in Taichi's posts, but I think that Shia's vocabulary, just... pretty-fies the post? If Shia didn't have the sort of vocabulary she does, I think that Taichi's posts would be kind of boring, because yeah... there's never much going on that actually pulls me into the post, it's the flow of Shia's writing that pulls me in, and how awesomely she uses vocabulary, etc ( ... )

FINISH HIM :O anbyrobanby May 1 2008, 22:40:58 UTC

OK, so I'll be brief cos I keep getting distracted ( ... )

RAIDEN sashwizzled May 2 2008, 00:32:46 UTC

I'm really tired I'm afraid, guys, so this'll be short and sweet.... I did want to get a vote in, though, so I hope this is okay.

I've discussed with Shia before my problems with Taichi, and I have to say that this last post was a big improvement - I had no problems picturing everything, Taichi's feelings came across really clearly and it was as intelligent and insightful as any post before it. I would really love it if you could keep that up, Shia - I know I told you your writing wasn't my cup of tea, but I honestly did enjoy that last post.

However, I do think that Raiden's been the superior force this version, I'm afraid. He's handled everything he's done quite well, has pulled himself out of the Yuichi comparisons and has solid motives and insightful backstory for a lot of aspects in his life, and every one of them's kept me interested. The explosion post was one of my favourites of the version. So I'm giving him this one.

You've both done an amazing job this version, guys - good luck.

incubicles May 2 2008, 02:01:34 UTC

RAIDEN: 5
TAICHI: 0

Raiden kills Taichi. Great game, Shia!

Congratulations to the Final 5!