Raiden vs. Taichi
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FIGHT TO THE DEATH~
Who lives, who dies? Raiden Shindou vs. Taichi Nawabe.
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FIGHT TO THE DEATH~
Who lives, who dies? Raiden Shindou vs. Taichi Nawabe.
Votes are screened. Time is 9:40 PM eastern time. Go, go, go~
Taiiichii. Okay. To be honest, not much happens in Taichi's posts, but I think that Shia's vocabulary, just... pretty-fies the post? If Shia didn't have the sort of vocabulary she does, I think that Taichi's posts would be kind of boring, because yeah... there's never much going on that actually pulls me into the post, it's the flow of Shia's writing that pulls me in, and how awesomely she uses vocabulary, etc.
But, of course, sometimes, Shia's vocabulary can bite back at her. On occasions (and I forgot to mention this in my other Taichi vote, because I didn't realise you could actually take points off someone for use of good vocab XD *stupid*), I don't know what is going on, because the use of words Shia uses is just not what I know of. :| Maybe it's just me, because I'm not that great, but I really don't fancy looking up the meaning of every word just so I can understand what the hell is going on. XD One example would be when Taichi got kissed by a dog. I, to be honest, thought he was kissing Mami, but I didn't find out until later that he was actually kissing a dog. XD Call me stupid, but yeah...
Okay, Raiden. There's not much crit I can think of... Raiden's really good, and omg, he's so realistic. I adore the way Sophie has characterized him. Just... yeah. D: I think that though, Sophie could still (although, at this point, it might be a bit too late) make Raiden feel as part of the class even more by having him interact with other people than just the nerd crew, and a few select others. Like... he does feel part of it, but I think Sophie could do more in that way.
Okay... I'm sorry if this was a crappy vote. x__x But I'll sum it up:
Writing ability: Sophie. Even though she doesn't have a vocabulary as wide as Shia, I still think that her writing is better, just because of the content.
Characterization: Raiden. Like I said before, he's been more realisticly done than Taichi...
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