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br0kenumbrella

Giving Up

Oct 14, 2011 17:26

Title: Giving Up
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: TOP/Seungri
Genre: drama/angst
Summary: Seungri wonders if people can really change.
A/n: Idea taken from

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oneshot, 30-day fic challenge

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vvipforseungri October 15 2011, 02:54:16 UTC

Amen to that >.>

br0kenumbrella October 17 2011, 00:24:57 UTC

haha - its so easy to put the blame on GTOP lol - thanks for reading hun! (sorry it's taking me so long to tackle your prompts...lol)

vvipforseungri October 15 2011, 02:06:18 UTC

Oh Gosh, I actually liked this so much you can't even imagine. I've been longing for a good angst fic for a long time now.

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vvipforseungri October 15 2011, 02:55:11 UTC

LOL I saw you, too :D Yes, I've been wanting to write TopRi after Analeptic as well actually! Instead, I've just finished another fic for your 30 day challenge thingy...

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beginner_ada October 15 2011, 03:13:55 UTC

This was very good. I could imagine visually how the two were talking, how their atmosphere tenses with each and every move. Thrilling, very dramatic. I really don't like angst because I prefer happy endings, but this was great. Thank you for sharing.

br0kenumbrella October 17 2011, 00:26:54 UTC

I have such a soft spot for angst even though I prefer happy endings just like you. Then again, we can't all have happy endings (wow that sounded so bitter...lol) - thank you for reading, hun!

zenyangyin October 15 2011, 08:00:06 UTC

That blew my mind :D.
I like how the whole thing was just based on that omw question.
I really feel like this should continue to make both top and gd suffer >:D but I am content with his ending.
I also liked the fact that this time seungri is the bigger man and walks out on him.
Fantastic job

br0kenumbrella October 17 2011, 00:29:48 UTC

Yea I was watching a show on TV and the scene opened up with some guy asking the other if people could change. Granted the question was posed by a murderer as he sat opposite of his next victim tied to a chair - but nevertheless the question stuck in my mind.

A sequel to make them suffer, huh? I like how you think :)

thanks for reading!

miyacherries October 15 2011, 12:42:37 UTC

Haunggggg... I feel like I was standing in front of them, seeing Ri n TOP fighting with their emo..
But somehow, when Ri's blurt out the last words, I wanna high five him?!?
Betrayal is always leaving a scar~~~>.<

LOVE IT!!

br0kenumbrella October 17 2011, 00:32:46 UTC

I'm right with you on the high five. I have to applaud the way Ri handled the situation. I probably would have cursed up a storm and tried to plot some type of revenge...but he seemed so calm and collected that I think his lack of reaction to everything made it hurt Seunghyun even more. I dunno..just my thoughts...lol

anyways, thank you so much for reading it!