Comments | boyfriendincoma: Fic: Afternoon Delight (Veronica, Logan) PG-13

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Fic: Afternoon Delight (Veronica, Logan) PG-13

Feb 14, 2006 06:18

Title: 19½: Afternoon Delight
Author: boyfriendincoma
Pairing/Character: Veronica, Logan
Word Count: 5,665
Rating: PG-13
Summary: If you've got a today, don't wear it tomorrow. Tomorrow never happens. It's all the same day.
Spoilers/Warnings: Takes place between 1.19 and 1.20. Spoilers up to Hot Dogs, obviously ( Read more... )

Comments 21

abbylee February 14 2006, 03:57:49 UTC

Holy fucking god.

Yeah. That was fantastic.

boyfriendincoma February 15 2006, 00:59:37 UTC

You seem to kinda like it. ;)

Thanks for the rec by the way. I really appreciate it.

bluegreensmoke February 14 2006, 04:13:39 UTC

Thanks, I really enjoyed that.

boyfriendincoma February 15 2006, 01:02:02 UTC

Thank you, I really had fun writing it. (Except for the seven months between having the idea and figuring out how it could be written. That was the difficult part.)

ambrent February 14 2006, 11:02:19 UTC

This was great. I might have gasped in glee when I saw your new fic pop up on my friends page. I might have, mind you.

boyfriendincoma February 15 2006, 01:04:52 UTC

Well, I definitely did not dance that silly dance when I finally finished my first fic in five months.

...

Okay, I might have.

girlcontinuum February 14 2006, 12:18:51 UTC

Hee. That is incredible.

boyfriendincoma February 15 2006, 01:06:52 UTC

Thank you.

eolivet February 15 2006, 01:04:27 UTC

If it's wrong to leave a review for a fic one has beta'ed, I don't want to be right. :D I'm so thrilled you posted this -- it's unbelievably witty and clever, and -- I still maintain -- pretty darn touching at the same time. :) So glad you're writing again -- and so grateful to read it!!! Keeeep writing!!! :)

boyfriendincoma February 15 2006, 01:27:30 UTC

pretty darn touching at the same time.

Originally, it was supposed to be kind of... just comedy and silly. But for some reason (I'd like to blame on emo music, but really can't, because I suspect it is actually inspired by Season Two.) it became about the fragility of happiness. Because ultimately, despite the fic not spoiling anything beyond 1.19, its ideal reader is someone who knows that these two people (who might frustratedly and unsuccessfully investigate the Bluths, but are experiencing a quite happy and carefree time doing so) will be quite unhappy with each other very soon. The ideal reader should be aware that this won't last.

Keeeep writing!

Keep pestering me about it, because that actually tends to work. The only problem is that the only idea left from last summer (And I haven't gotten any new ones in the mean time. Shocking. I know.) is the Weevil story.