Comments | boyfriendincoma: Fic: Afternoon Delight (Veronica, Logan) PG-13

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Fic: Afternoon Delight (Veronica, Logan) PG-13

Feb 14, 2006 06:18

Title: 19½: Afternoon Delight
Author: boyfriendincoma
Pairing/Character: Veronica, Logan
Word Count: 5,665
Rating: PG-13
Summary: If you've got a today, don't wear it tomorrow. Tomorrow never happens. It's all the same day.
Spoilers/Warnings: Takes place between 1.19 and 1.20. Spoilers up to Hot Dogs, obviously ( Read more... )

Comments 21

mswyrr February 15 2006, 01:37:11 UTC

You have an almost Wodehousian deft touch with humorous dialogue and prose. The way you phrase things, the words you choose, and the content; it's all just absolutely perfect. Brilliant.

boyfriendincoma February 15 2006, 17:43:43 UTC

Thank you, that's a great compliment.

mswyrr February 15 2006, 01:43:19 UTC

Also, Logan Echolls as a re-born virgin? Not only LMAO funny, but kinda hot, too. ;)

nzlaura February 15 2006, 09:54:12 UTC

Ha! I love all the hilarious AD references you managed to slip in here. And this is so Logan: "All of the seats in this car are cheap, since they came with the car."

boyfriendincoma February 15 2006, 17:46:13 UTC

Thank you. I've got to admit I always thought the 'cheap car' line is a bit flat, but I never found anything to replace it with.

nickslizzy May 4 2006, 19:20:44 UTC

That was crazy clever, i loved it. thankx

(Calls out to boyfriend, arm raised high: Steven Holt!)

boyfriendincoma May 5 2006, 21:34:02 UTC

Thank you. And good luck with the boyfriend. :)

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boyfriendincoma July 19 2006, 20:10:25 UTC

I know I am late, but thank you. Your icon cracks me up by the way.