Altville, Part Thirty-One

Jun 26, 2003 01:53

I couldn't get with the program
And I couldn't listen to them
It was like trying to think in reverse
And I don't want to slide into apathy
And I don't want to die in captivity
But these monsters follow me around
Hunting me down, trying to wipe me out
~ Something For Kate, 'Monsters'

Altville, Part Thirty-One )

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svmadelyn June 26 2003, 02:01:43 UTC
"You saved my life twice now," Julian said quietly.

"I don't think--"

"You don't think it means something?"

Alex gave in to temptation, reached out and took the cigarette out of Julian's hand. Dropping it on the ground, he planted his heel on it and crushed it.

*loves Alex* and secretly, secretly thinks Julian is a bit touched by the gesture in his little heart of hearts....

Really, Julian had been less shocked by the gun than the expression on Alex's face, before Alex recognized him.

Oh, *yes.*

He felt his t-shirt tear-- felt Greg's fingernails scrape across his chest, digging deep but not catching, not marking him in any way.

It's still so very wrong that I'm left with thinking only of Shirtless! or NearlyShirtless!Julian.

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aesvir June 26 2003, 04:27:45 UTC
It's still so very wrong that I'm left with thinking only of Shirtless! or NearlyShirtless!Julian.

You read my mind. *blushes*

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Worth the wait! cjandre June 26 2003, 03:34:27 UTC
Wonderful installment! lots of tension going! Yay!

Your choreography of the action scenes is great - and i love this Pete!

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anonymous June 26 2003, 05:40:57 UTC
Again you amaze me with your ability to detail fight scenes and communicate the tension that goes along with them. Really good chapter. Now, would you make them kiss or something, please?
SweetDee

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twigged June 26 2003, 05:55:53 UTC
Great installment, Livia! I was without internet access all of last week, and this WiP is the first thing I checked when I got back. Didn't find *nearly* enough to satisfy me. *g*

Faster, girl!

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jic June 26 2003, 05:58:00 UTC
Whoo! Serial makes me happy. *hugs*

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