FIC: If A Dog Were Your Teacher (Lesson 6)

[bowie28]

Title: If A Dog Were Your Teacher (Lesson 6)
Author: Bow a.k.a. bowie28
Pairing: Jensen/Jared
Word count: 2,341
Rating: R (implicit sex)
Disclaimer: FICTION.
Warning: angst, humor, introspective Jensen
Spoilers: none
Beta: a wonderful tariana ♥♥♥

A/N: Another part of my dog-lessons 'verse. Each part is intended to be read as a standalone

Comments

[lena3]

I've been following this series and been enjoying it. This one though was awesome. It made my heart clench a little for Jensen. The feelings there were real. For a lot of us. Fantastic job on this series.

[bowie28]

I aimed for honesty when I wrote this, so I'm glad you found it real (and not too angsty, lol). Thanks for reading and leaving such lovely feedback. It's partly what keeps me going. &hearts

[willow_fae_20]

N'Aaaaawwwwwww. I was all set to be sad for The Boys. But you made it OK. So I'm happy again. I totally adore this series.

[bowie28]

LOL, sorry for the angst. I was in the mood for a little drama, but not too dramatic. And of course I gave the boys happy ending! I write to please myself after all.

Thanks for reading!

[already]

i love your Jensen and your Jared, the way you write them makes them believable to me.

another lovely installment ♥

[bowie28]

Thank you! Characterization is the thing I take seriously when I read (and write) fics. I'm glad that I've done the boys justice so far. &hearts

[romelwen]

Oh, god! The boys got me worried there for a second. *phew*

Honey, this one was amazing. Jensen can act weird as many times as he wants because Jared will always see right through him and make everything easier for him. It's like Jared's reactions are based in his raw emotions, less complications, only love. Jensen, however, tends to over-think things too much. It's a perfect parallel of the way humans and doggies deal with their lives. If only we were all more like our furry friends (and Jared ♥)!

I loved all the interchanges between them. I applaud you for making them sound so real, they are spot on!

The sex scene was really hot but what I liked the most, apart from the style you used, is that it was impregnated with Jensen's fears all along. It was perfect.

So... how much do I have to wait for the next installment? *winks*

♥

[bowie28]

They gotta end up fighting some time, don't they? Even when they're so freaking in love with each other. And also while I was writing, I listened to a lot of Evanescence and other angsty songs, so this is the result, lol

[romelwen]

You did an excellent job at making the title and the story work. I must confess that I started reading this lesson absolutely convinced that it would be, in full, a lighthearted story. Much to my surprise, Jensen started getting angstier and angstier and I found myself worrying for the boys. Right at the end when like with each of the previous installments I was completely satisfied, I realized that the topic had misled me, but in the best of ways. I don't know if the reading experience would have been the same if I had set myself for the kind of story that it really was. You managed to gradually change my mood. Following Jensen's train of thoughts got me there. There's a lot to say about your writing skills because this vibe change didn't came with a shock, I was guided in such a way I only aware of what had happened at the end. Props to you.

I'll be eagerly waiting. ♥

[bowie28]

I'd love to write pure schmoopy stories, my dear, but there are lessons to be learned as well, so I have to find the balance. As for the misleading, I normally try to avoid that, but sometimes things just didn't work out the way we plan, lol.

Well, thank you. I've been busy with other stuff right now, but as soon as I get them done, Ill be writing the next lesson. :)

[arabella_hope]

Your boys make me so HAPPY. Man! <3

[bowie28]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this. The boys make me happy too. :D