FIC: If A Dog Were Your Teacher (Lesson 6)

[bowie28]

Title: If A Dog Were Your Teacher (Lesson 6)
Author: Bow a.k.a. bowie28
Pairing: Jensen/Jared
Word count: 2,341
Rating: R (implicit sex)
Disclaimer: FICTION.
Warning: angst, humor, introspective Jensen
Spoilers: none
Beta: a wonderful tariana ♥♥♥

A/N: Another part of my dog-lessons 'verse. Each part is intended to be read as a standalone

Comments

[romelwen]

Oh, god! The boys got me worried there for a second. *phew*

Honey, this one was amazing. Jensen can act weird as many times as he wants because Jared will always see right through him and make everything easier for him. It's like Jared's reactions are based in his raw emotions, less complications, only love. Jensen, however, tends to over-think things too much. It's a perfect parallel of the way humans and doggies deal with their lives. If only we were all more like our furry friends (and Jared ♥)!

I loved all the interchanges between them. I applaud you for making them sound so real, they are spot on!

The sex scene was really hot but what I liked the most, apart from the style you used, is that it was impregnated with Jensen's fears all along. It was perfect.

So... how much do I have to wait for the next installment? *winks*

♥

[bowie28]

They gotta end up fighting some time, don't they? Even when they're so freaking in love with each other. And also while I was writing, I listened to a lot of Evanescence and other angsty songs, so this is the result, lol

[romelwen]

You did an excellent job at making the title and the story work. I must confess that I started reading this lesson absolutely convinced that it would be, in full, a lighthearted story. Much to my surprise, Jensen started getting angstier and angstier and I found myself worrying for the boys. Right at the end when like with each of the previous installments I was completely satisfied, I realized that the topic had misled me, but in the best of ways. I don't know if the reading experience would have been the same if I had set myself for the kind of story that it really was. You managed to gradually change my mood. Following Jensen's train of thoughts got me there. There's a lot to say about your writing skills because this vibe change didn't came with a shock, I was guided in such a way I only aware of what had happened at the end. Props to you.

I'll be eagerly waiting. ♥

[bowie28]

I'd love to write pure schmoopy stories, my dear, but there are lessons to be learned as well, so I have to find the balance. As for the misleading, I normally try to avoid that, but sometimes things just didn't work out the way we plan, lol.

Well, thank you. I've been busy with other stuff right now, but as soon as I get them done, Ill be writing the next lesson. :)

[romelwen]

Oh, no I think I didn't explain myself clear enough. I wasn't complaining. You didn't do anything wrong. The warnings said exactly what the reader needed to know. I, for one, usually try to avoid them because I want to stay as spoiler-free as possible, I love to get surprise, and you managed to that. Besides, you've got nothing to worry about cause I'm all about angst. Your series happens to be the schmoopiest I follow, but there's something about it that captivates me. *sighs*

Thank you, hon!

[bowie28]

LOL, I got what you meant the first time. I was just rambling. I'm all for angst as well. :D

[romelwen]

LOL! Things like these happen when it's 3.30am and the episode isn't up yet. Man! I want my new epi like whoa!

[bowie28]

Tell me about it. So weird that it takes so long for the episode to be up. But normally I watch SPN at night my time, so I have about 6 hours to go, so I'm not that frustrated. :D

[romelwen]

Send me good vibes hon, I'm about to burst out crying. I really need my fix (and go sleep, and have a life, LOL!)