Dear Diary....

[bou_sempai]

Tora always liked Saga romantically, since the first day they met. He remembered those peaceful childhood days, where Saga would run up, and hug Tora and whisper in his ear, “Tora-kun Daisuki.” It made him feel loved and special, and he adored Saga for that. Now that they were older, there feelings haven’t changed, but they themselves have. Tora

Comments

[pink_minded]

Matte. I'm actually typing the things that I told you to... add, or something. XD I'll pm you if it's ready, ne? ♥

[bou_sempai]

yay sank you soo much!

[pink_minded]

I hope it's okay for you because it's a bit too long for a oneshot. D=

[bou_sempai]

lol its fine ^-~ i love your advice :]

[13blackjewelsff]

This is not bad for a first fic at all but I agree with another comment someone made--it feels a bit rushed and needs more details because I became confused too and had to re-read it twice. Maybe you should get a beta reader ^^

Hope the advice helps and keep writing.

[bou_sempai]

wow! ^-^ thanks for the advice! I get nervous when writing so I tend to rush alot..-looks away-.. sorry for the late respnose.. i r at stupid camppu.