Dear Diary....

[bou_sempai]

Tora always liked Saga romantically, since the first day they met. He remembered those peaceful childhood days, where Saga would run up, and hug Tora and whisper in his ear, “Tora-kun Daisuki.” It made him feel loved and special, and he adored Saga for that. Now that they were older, there feelings haven’t changed, but they themselves have. Tora

Comments

[pink_minded]

I seriously think you don't need a beta, BB! ♥ This, no. You are freakin' amazing!

A little note. I hope I don't get killed or shot with this. XD;;

But maybe you should added more details in Saga-chan's diary though, a-and Tora should denied more when Saga asked him if he read his diary or not, and putted some sweet goodnight thingy scenes before they went to their deep sleep. And the rest, it's amazing!

[bou_sempai]

omg! your so right!!!!!! :D umm if you wouldnt mind... could you add it? >.< cos i still am pretty noobish at alice nine... >.<''''

[a_ashi]

it was dead funny until the smut part
did you seriously made Tora uke with Saga???? *ish shocked*
I loved the story *nods* ♥ but the idea of Tora uke is disturbing me XDDD

[nyappysteph]

I liked this :D....you're not a bad writer & for this being your first fic it was fine *nodnod*

[nyappysteph]

*first alice9 fic

[zb24]

It was okay.

I think you need to slow down though! It felt like the whole thing was rushed.

And also, make sure to take the time to add details. Not so much of the sex, but where are people at right now. For example, when did Saga get up and leave? All I read was he came back. *confused*

Your concept is REALLY good! I like the concept.

Keep writing, okay? (^_^) I hope I didn't make you feel bad.

~ZB24~

[pink_minded]

Oh wait! I have a new edit for this! But it's kinda late. -_- I just got online just now. DX

[bou_sempai]

omg please edit.. D:
-bows-

[pink_minded]

Sure! Matte. I'll rephrase some things, and you can copy and paste everything after I post it to my LJ. ^0^

Don't bow! XD

[bou_sempai]

lol omg thanks so much :D