Penance: Prologue

[borborygmus5000]

Title: Penance
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: R
Length: Chaptered
Genre: Angst, drama
Summary: Yunho once chose kinship over love, and is now willing to do anything as penance for his act of betrayal.

Comments

Nice Start

[remedywhistle]

I would not have guessed that this was your first attempt at writing. You were very descriptive and your writing flowed quite well. I look forward to reading more.

Re: Nice Start

[borborygmus5000]

Thanks for taking the time to leave a first comment. The plot has been bothering me for a while, and I just thought its about time to start translating the ideas into a piece of writing. The sheer immensity of what I have in mind keeps deterring me though.

[yunjaeruuuv]

I'm excited for hat's coming! :)

[borborygmus5000]

i am also pretty excited, and very nervous, about writing the rest of it. (: Thanks for reading.

[sheilapiglet]

wow, so much emotion in just the prologue...makes me very curious as to what happened between Yunjae and how Jae ended up in jail....did he take the fall for YH perhaps?...if he did, this can't possibly be a happy YJ ending because surely YH doesn't deserve him and never will....so I'm worried...lol...nevertheless, hope you update soon=)

[borborygmus5000]

hmmm, that will be revealed in later chapters. I am actually all for happy endings, it may be an arduous road for YJ in this case, but reading broken YJ in the past has left me feeling unfulfilled. And yes, I will try my best to update soon (:

[kattan69]

Poor Jae..being raped by the warden. This is so sad. Would Jae seek revenge on Yunho. Was he framed for the crime?

[borborygmus5000]

It is heartbreaking, and i find rape to be one of the most heinous crimes. Thanks for the interest and taking time to comment!

[larlyssa]

[borborygmus5000]

I just wanna say thank you for reading, and letting me know that you've read by commenting! I am still debating internally about a lot of aspects, which includes how the characters will be introduced (: