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borborygmus5000

Penance: Prologue

Jan 31, 2013 01:54

Title: Penance
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: R
Length: Chaptered
Genre: Angst, drama
Summary: Yunho once chose kinship over love, and is now willing to do anything as penance for his act of betrayal.
( He had trained himself to harden his heart )

fic: penance

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borborygmus5000 January 31 2013, 02:12:54 UTC

Hmmm, it is angsty, but i chose to end the prologue with a glimmer of hope. And guess what, I am also the happily ever after kind of girl. A happy ending in this case will be a lot sweeter if YJ overcome insurmountable odds together before, no? Thanks for reading (:

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borborygmus5000 January 31 2013, 02:13:30 UTC

Or else?

Yes Sir!!!

Keep Going! falcon2339 January 31 2013, 01:01:17 UTC

Continue.....Continue.....Continue.....Continue......

Re: Keep Going! borborygmus5000 January 31 2013, 02:16:15 UTC

hee hee I guess I should? The real difficulty really lies in continuing updates and eventually completing this at a satisfactory level. In any case, thanks for taking the time to read and comment (:

snow_meow January 31 2013, 02:02:39 UTC

I'm interested to read more.
I want to find out why Jaejoong is in jail and what happened between him and Yunho.

borborygmus5000 January 31 2013, 02:17:36 UTC

honestly, that is the part I fear writing the most. Thanks for the interest and comment (:

dulanis January 31 2013, 04:05:39 UTC

This was so sad but so well written :D I loved it
Can't wait for the next update

borborygmus5000 January 31 2013, 05:10:03 UTC

Thanks for the encouragement (: I didn't know how it got so sad, i had a main plot but somehow other it turned out like that when i put it into words..

dulanis January 31 2013, 05:36:28 UTC

It's ok. :)