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Buried Deep, part 4

Mar 16, 2012 22:41

Title: Buried Deep, part 4/?
Summary: The morning after the night before. The boys are wondering what happens next
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Only for high sugar content
Spoilers: Nobody is wearing pyjamas at any point in this chapter
Length: about 3650 words
Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters, I just borrow them to play with every now and again. For ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, fan fiction, genre: fluff, oral, pairing: howard/vince

Comments 9

pussywhang March 17 2012, 02:22:21 UTC

mmm hot stuff! I loved Vince pretending to be asleep, as well as the hot 69'ing. :D Also, them talking about their future, that was great, ha ha! & the end part with Naboo and Bollo, nicely done :)

ideserveyou March 17 2012, 08:55:10 UTC

Cheers - glad you like! Vince had me going there too, but it was so like him to be pretending, so as to give Howard a chance to explore without embarrassment. And since their future in this timeline is going to be a bit different from canon, I thought it might be fun to throw some canon themes in there and mix them up a bit. That was my favourite part to write :)

concupiscence66 March 17 2012, 06:38:50 UTC

I can't post a coherent comment but I've read it twice already and akd;lfakdef;a;dk. I have a feeling this is going to be one of my go-to procrasination pieces! I know part 5 is a lot to ask but *cough, cough* Your title? *cough, cough*

ideserveyou March 17 2012, 08:59:17 UTC

So it was... all right, then? *g*

Thank you.

Drat the title. If I'd stuck to calling it 'What's in the box?' or 'Pushing up the daisies' all this would never have happened. And I'd have written more than the opening paragraph of my threeway.

However... since Naboo has so thoughtfully done the tidying and the morning feed for them, I guess they can stay in bed for a bit longer...

And I have another scrap of dialogue from Naboo and his new familiar that has to go in there somewhere.

No promises. But definitely scope for optimism!

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ideserveyou March 17 2012, 22:22:54 UTC

Thanks - there will be more, not sure how much more yet but definitely enough to turn my innocent title into a mature one!

(All parts from 2 onwards are actually Concupid's fault btw. This was only ever going to be a sweet and slightly angst-y one-shot. And somehow I seem to have ended up writing an epic...)

pitpony13 March 18 2012, 02:38:56 UTC

This is amazing! I'm glad you're continuing it!

ideserveyou March 18 2012, 08:58:09 UTC

And I'm very happy you're still reading it!

I've got an idea for the next part now...

500daysofbummer March 19 2012, 04:25:14 UTC

wow. this was completely gorgeous and hot!! YAYAYAY for 69 times, that can never ever happen enough ;) i like that howard got the nerve to try some amazing new things, i like that vince came first, howard enjoying nutella (FINALLY he's enjoying some things, about time howard, makes me so glad to see!!) and of course their talk of the future. so basically i loved every bit of this. i see there's a good chance you'll be continuing this further? i sure hope so, this is lovely <33333

ideserveyou March 19 2012, 08:16:45 UTC

Thank you for the kind words! It seemed right that Vince should come first, I liked the idea that Howard could make him lose it when nobody else had ever been able to. And it's done wonders for Howard's self-confidence.
The nutella is all Concupid's fault but I can see it becoming a recurring theme in my Boosh fic from here on in. It has a lot of delicious fictional possibilities!
I have an idea for a Part 5 but I think that might be the happy ending as far as this particular alternate future is concerned. There are lots of other things I want to write though ;)