A Game of Poker, Chapter 35: Burning Bridges

Aug 03, 2010 17:33

Title: A Game of Poker
Author: Bookkbaby
Rating: Teen
Warnings: YAOI
Summary: LUCKY Pair. It started as a simple game of poker, but a little white lie from Lavi changes everything. ['If you lose... you spend the night here, with me, and let me do whatever I want with you.']

Chapter 35: Burning Bridges )

lucky, yaoi, tyki, lavi, fanfiction, poker

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Yaaaaaay!! An update!! 8D nikita005 August 4 2010, 06:49:52 UTC
OMG, Booky, you have no idea how happy I am to see this chapter!! :D

Loved the updated!!

Ugh, Leverrier... Poor Komui, the guy just can't get a break. He's getting the third degree from both the enemies as well as the order higher-ups. :(

I'm waiting with bated breath for when Allen is finally enlightened as to why Kanda is acting the way he is around him. It's gonna be a sight, to say the least!! Lol

And the bit with the mitarashi sauce was just freakin' epic. I was laughing so hard. Kanda gets riled so easily, and Tyki's just sneaky enough to take advantage of the fact. XD

At least that will give Tyki a diversion since SOMEONE **cough,cough** Lavi **cough,cough** is being retarded. That lunkhead! Gyah!! >:( Don't get me wrong, his reasoning is obvious, but it's still so frustrating! >.<

Anyways, I'll jump off the soapbox now. Here's to hoping 36 goes smoothly for ya! I can't wait!

'Til next time!

nikita :)

Oh, and I hope you had a great time on your trip!! ^_^

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Re: Yaaaaaay!! An update!! 8D bookkbaby January 4 2011, 04:51:47 UTC
Thank you! (the trip was epic, by the way)

I'm glad you liked the chapter. ^_^ Sorry that the wait for 36 has been so long, but I should have it posted within a day!

I'm glad you liked the part with the mitarashi sauce. It was a last-minute add-on, but it cracked me up. ^_^

Again, thank you!

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Re: Yaaaaaay!! An update!! 8D nikita005 January 4 2011, 05:42:17 UTC
That's fantastic news on both counts!! :D

Lol, "yay" for last-minute add-ons then! It was great! XD

Later!

:)

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creature002 August 4 2010, 15:05:46 UTC
Oh gawd. An update * A*

Anyways..
That was so unnecessary Lavi T ___T
You're breaking my heart here.

Hope we don't have to wait so many chapters before they clear things up and gets all lovely dovely again D:

Oh, one last thing. FUCK YOU LAVERRIER, don't even think about doing some shit to Tyki or whatever you and your hitler mustache are planning D:

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bookkbaby January 4 2011, 04:52:48 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Lavi is breaking my heart too. T_T Poor Tyki...

Sorry to have kept you waiting for so long, but chapter 36 should be posted within a day! Thank you!

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burachanka August 5 2010, 11:38:29 UTC
Aah, the long wait was totally worth it! :D
I loved Tyki and Allen's conversation, not to mention jealous and possessive Kanda...

Lavi left me frustrated to no end, though. I mean, I understand his motivations and all, but seriously, he should realize that Tyki sacrificed EVERYTHING for HIM and does not deserve to be treated like that. I hope that Tyki doesn't give up and the whole situation between them is resolved soon enough. I really can't wait to see how you'll handle this. :)

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bookkbaby January 4 2011, 04:54:25 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you think the chapters are worth the wait. ^_^

I'm glad you liked the interaction between Tyki, Allen, and Kanda. It was a ton of frun to write!

Hopefully you won't be disappointed by my handling of the situation. ^_^ Sorry to have kept you waiting for so long, but chapter 36 should be posted within a day! I hope you enjoy!

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sir_komlin August 5 2010, 22:37:48 UTC
My mood lifted just a little bit when I saw you'd updated. I've been dying to know how the TykiLavi talk would go. Although it would've been nice to see them get back together I'm kinda glad they haven't yet. It'll be funny/aggravating to see them try to deny their feelings for a while longer. ^__^
Lavi was just plain mean though, and it seemed like Tyki found it really hard trying to pretend he didn't care either. Bless him :(

I lol'd when Tyki started 'flirting' with Allen to get Kanda angry.

Seriously can't wait for the next chapter. XD

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bookkbaby January 4 2011, 04:55:26 UTC
I'm glad you look forward to the updates so much. ^_^ I hope you continue to look forward to them!

*huggles Tyki and Lavi* They are just adorable, aren't they? And heartbreaking. T_T

Sorry to have kept you waiting for so long, but chapter 36 should be posted within a day! I hope you enjoy!

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jokerlove August 11 2010, 07:32:38 UTC
All my favorites updated while I was away! <3
Why do I have a horrible feeling that your gonna do something to make me cry again before this is over? I can feel it building like the undercurrent before a wave! Grr! I want to know what happens!
On another note, the brother sister scene was so freaking heart breaking. I loved it!
And woot to the Kanda and Allen bits, I can see them if I squint! LOL Tyki you playa! But you gotta give the man props, I mean he didn't even have to squint and he saw it. I think he has a built in radar that goes off when there is sexual tension. Its located in his beauty mark!
Can't wait for the next update. We love you!
Joker

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bookkbaby January 4 2011, 04:56:53 UTC
I'm glad you like the fic so much. ^_^

I'm glad you liked the brother-sister bit! I do love writing those two together, since they have an adorable sibling relationship.

But of course, I love writing Allen and Kanda too... they are too much fun to play with!

Sorry to have kept you waiting for so long, but chapter 36 should be posted within a day! I hope you enjoy!

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