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bonspiel

Fic: Tangled Part Three

Mar 01, 2009 21:39

( Tangled, Part Three )

my fic

Comments 52

bitterbird March 4 2009, 09:30:28 UTC

this was fantastic, the layout and style of this was fantastic
really amazing work <3

bonspiel March 10 2009, 03:48:05 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting.

nachekana March 4 2009, 16:56:57 UTC

I really liked it! I love how you used the entire team to show us what was happening. Thanks for sharing. =D

bonspiel March 10 2009, 03:49:15 UTC

Thanks so much. I wish I'd been able to do more from the other characters' POVs, but I think that's one of the cool things about an epistolary/document-based thing, you get to see all kinds of POVs.

anifsemaj March 4 2009, 19:53:10 UTC

Oh, this is really well done! I love the style! Awesome!

bonspiel March 10 2009, 03:49:33 UTC

Thank you; I appreciate the comment.

multiversum_4 March 5 2009, 18:40:54 UTC

What a wonderful read!! This was really inventive! Enjoyed it very much :-)

bonspiel March 10 2009, 03:49:53 UTC

Thank you very much.

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bonspiel March 10 2009, 03:50:54 UTC

Thanks! I couldn't resist that boss subplot from The Shop Around the Corner, it was just too interesting. I'm glad that you thought it didn't drag.