Comments | bonspiel: Fic: Tangled Part Three

bonspiel

Fic: Tangled Part Three

Mar 01, 2009 21:39

Comments 52

xancredible March 2 2009, 18:08:45 UTC

I'm usually not that much a fan of this style of story/novel but you pulled it of great and I like it a lot!

YGM is one of my favorite movies ever and you did a great job with adabting it to a J² RPS

I figured out all the shortcuts of the emails pretty easily - except for the person JDM writes to. Help?

bonspiel March 2 2009, 20:06:07 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

The person Jeff writes to is supposed to be Mary-Louise Parker, who's his girlfriend in the story but is in London working for a while.

xancredible March 2 2009, 21:19:07 UTC

Thanks!

jellicle March 3 2009, 00:39:49 UTC

I have to say, this is, in my humble opinion, a thousand times better than You've Got Mail.

I loved everything about it! Specially the different way you use to present and progress the story - very fun and clever, and full of various creative pov.

Awesome work, definitely one of my faves!

bonspiel March 3 2009, 04:38:48 UTC

Wow, what a great comment to receive. Thank you very much.

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bonspiel March 10 2009, 03:47:10 UTC

Thank you, my dear, I'm glad you liked it!

bonbonschnecke March 3 2009, 09:42:33 UTC

This was wonderful written!

bonspiel March 10 2009, 03:47:22 UTC

Thank you very much.

joans23 March 3 2009, 17:41:35 UTC

This was genius! And so cute and good and yummy! Yay! :)

bonspiel March 10 2009, 03:47:40 UTC

Thank you!