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Love Month: Fic!

Aug 24, 2011 22:50

I'm really sorry I'm a bit late on this (though I suppose for those of you in the US I'm not really that late, phew). Anyway, for Love Month I've written a fic. I started this after The Hole in the Heart and it was going to be my take on what happened during That Scene, but then The Change in the Game came along and canon totally killed my idea. So ( Read more... )

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Comments 19

tempertemper August 24 2011, 21:57:33 UTC

I love seeing a peek into Booth's thoughts before Brennan came to his room - it's so right that he recognises the need to let her make a choice to seek comfort.

I also like the link between his dream and the moment where he holds his gun on her as he wakes. Gorgeous.

And THANK you for participating in Love Month - you ROCK! ♥

zinnia_rose August 25 2011, 10:41:56 UTC

Thank you, bb, both for the lovely comments and for organizing Love Month! :D I'm so glad you liked the dream link.

cleaninggirl August 25 2011, 00:05:46 UTC

Oh this is just a wonderful look into the time before Brennan goes to Booth seeking comfort. I'm so glad you actually posted it <3 I love how you captured not only Booth struggle with not going out to comfort Brennan but also he's nightmare and waking moments when Brennan does finally go to him, beautiful just simply beautiful.

I'm also going to shut up now as my brain is no longer in working order as it's after 1am where I am.

zinnia_rose August 25 2011, 10:42:36 UTC

Ha, I'll consider it a compliment that you commented even at 1 AM. Thank you so much! (And I hope you got to sleep in today.)

huronia August 25 2011, 01:11:45 UTC

Great take on Booth's thoughts.

zinnia_rose August 25 2011, 10:42:46 UTC

Thank you!

mendenbar01 August 25 2011, 02:14:45 UTC

I think it is interesting (read: funny) that in one episode, Booth is shown faithfully putting his gun in the gunsafe just inside the front door. But in this episode, he has it beside his bed. Guess he was still worried about Broadsky.

Nice insight.

zinnia_rose August 25 2011, 10:43:08 UTC

Ooh, I hadn't thought about that -- it is interesting, and very telling!

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

aplacecalled August 25 2011, 04:36:56 UTC

Oh, I love this! Especially the line between nightmare and reality, and the last line.

zinnia_rose August 25 2011, 10:43:53 UTC

Thank you! I'm so pleased you liked the last line -- it took me forever to word it properly.