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[For a while all that can be heard is snarling and muttered curses, maybe some banging furniture]

So this thing is a phone, right?

TENTH! Can you hear me?! Did I miss a meeting where we decided to go on a vacation?!

If that's the case, I'm so sorry!

Please tell me where you are so I can apologize in person!

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