Drabble Poem for Queen haldoor

[bold_seer]

Title: Best Judge
Rating: PG-13
Character: Sayid
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: season three
Summary: A guilty man makes the best judge.
A/N: For lostsquee Luau Queen Haldoor, though I’m afraid this is neither smutty Sawyer/Sayid nor a haiku/limerick.

Comments

[haldoor]

Wow... I have no problem with this being neither of the first things I asked for! It is Sayid to a T, and it is extremely well-written! He needed some attention, so I'm most pleased to see this! Thank you so much! ;-)

[bold_seer]

Oh, thank you - I'm glad you liked it!

Sayid seems to be a fairly popular character, and yet he gets so little fic. I suppose people just find him hard to write.

[haldoor]

I think you may be right. I'm never sure if I've done him justice, although zelda_zee has a wonderful Sayid voice. It's a pity more don't give him a shot though!

[bold_seer]

Agreed on zelda_zee and Sayid. Perhaps it should be her fannish duty to do a tutorial on writing Sayid - except that she already fulfilled that obligation by hosting the discussion on him at thequillstation. :)

[hendercats]

Oh, nicely done!
a tear on his conscience
he chooses to ignore
and
A guilty man makes the best judge
Powerful. And so perfectly Sayid.

[bold_seer]

Thank you so much!

I’m hesitant to say I had fun writing this, considering the subject matter, but "poetry" is certainly one of the most interesting Luau requests so far.

[jenthegypsy]

It’s not the same, no shame now to shatter him. Interesting observation, that the reason for killing makes a difference, that some acts are more justified than others. Nicely done!

[bold_seer]

Thank you!

Interesting observation, that the reason for killing makes a difference, that some acts are more justified than others.

I’m not sure if I personally believe that, but I think Sayid does.

[siluria]

I’m afraid this is neither smutty Sawyer/Sayid nor a haiku/limerick

It's damn good though!!!

[bold_seer]

:) Thank you! I've discovered I rather enjoy poetry.