"Coming home" - Steve/Danny One-Shot

Nov 06, 2010 14:09

“Okay… I’ll be there as soon as possible…“

Steve looked up from his desk to see Danny on the phone. Only seconds after hanging up, he walked over to Steve and looked him directly in the eye.

“I have to go!”

Before Steve had time to process what was happening, Danny was out of the office, leaving him to stare after him in confusion.

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slash, fanfic, pairings, hawaii five-0

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copper_on_mars November 6 2010, 14:02:51 UTC
Oh, I LIKE how it turned out to be. :D

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bm_shipper November 6 2010, 16:15:55 UTC
thank you!

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indigocat November 6 2010, 14:42:16 UTC
Loved the story.

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bm_shipper November 6 2010, 16:16:14 UTC
Thanks a lot =D

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samjohnsson November 6 2010, 17:42:04 UTC
Very nice. Danny would completely not handle any tragedy involving Grace well at all!

Also, you and your betas are awesome - looking at this, I'd not know English wasn't your first language (though Tears of relieve should be relief).

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bm_shipper November 6 2010, 17:45:23 UTC
Thanks *lol* 3 pairs of eyes and no one saw it... But thanks for the information anyways... not even my word showed it wrong O__O *lol* Strange, but of course you're totally right... and normally I know this... hm... whatever... :-)

Thank you so much for yoru comment... I appreciate that...

Like I said... it's thef irst fic I wrote in english from the start =D

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samjohnsson November 6 2010, 17:50:12 UTC
It's one of those things digital grammar checkers don't really know to look for, especially since it is an idiom.

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bm_shipper November 6 2010, 17:55:20 UTC
Yeah, you're maybe right :) thanks again =D

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megan_moonlight November 6 2010, 19:03:31 UTC
Never too much of h/c to make me smile X3 It's good to see Steve taking care of Danny (though in my head it's always Danny who takes care of Steve... it's a nice change to see it the other way around X3)
You did a great job, Hon! You should write more ;D

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bm_shipper November 6 2010, 19:12:27 UTC
yeah, I agree with you, but I thought for this for a while now... I thought about "What would Danny do if something would happen to Grace?", becaues I think, Grace is his "weak point"... kind of... Steve doesn't have something like that... Steve's "weak point" would in my opinion be Danny... or Mary... so if something would happen to any of them, he would need "someone" too... but yes... :-)

thank you... maybe I WILL write more eventually... don't know yet... =D

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megan_moonlight November 6 2010, 19:41:36 UTC
Well, I'll keep my fingers crossed for reading more of your fics ;D

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bm_shipper November 6 2010, 19:46:50 UTC
Thank you, that's sweet of you =D

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angelus2hot November 6 2010, 20:06:36 UTC
You already know that I love the fic but saying it once more couldn't hurt :D

And the title fits the fic perfectly!!

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bm_shipper November 6 2010, 20:08:51 UTC
Thank you so much for your commetn :)
I appreciate that :-)

And thanks for your help :)

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angelus2hot November 7 2010, 00:18:21 UTC
You're very welcome, anytime :)

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bm_shipper November 7 2010, 01:10:12 UTC
Thanks again :) I really appreciate that =D

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