"Coming home" - Steve/Danny One-Shot

Nov 06, 2010 14:09

“Okay… I’ll be there as soon as possible…“

Steve looked up from his desk to see Danny on the phone. Only seconds after hanging up, he walked over to Steve and looked him directly in the eye.

“I have to go!”

Before Steve had time to process what was happening, Danny was out of the office, leaving him to stare after him in confusion.

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slash, fanfic, pairings, hawaii five-0

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rainbow_goddess November 6 2010, 21:01:39 UTC
Very sweet, and impressive considering that English isn't even your first language.

One minor peeve: if she has a virus, they won't give her antibiotics. Antibiotics don't work with viruses.

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bm_shipper November 6 2010, 21:14:32 UTC
Thank you... that means a lot to me :)

and okay... thanks for the information either... I didn't know that at all, but I once had this virus and my doctor treated me with some antibiotics, but of course it wasn't THIS kind of virus, it was some stomach virus I had ;-)

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koronaphoenix November 6 2010, 21:12:14 UTC
Although I've already given you my thoughts about this fic in somewhat extensive detail (lol), I still wanted to comment and let you know that I enjoyed reading it yet again. I think it turned out nicely. I hope that you will eventually share more of your Hawaii 5-0 fanfiction in the future. ;)

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bm_shipper November 6 2010, 21:26:23 UTC
Thank you sooooooooo much for your comment... I really really appreciate it... :-) and if I will write something Steve/Danny related again, I know who I can come to to beta-read ;-) So thanks again for your help =D

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lillyg November 6 2010, 23:11:44 UTC
Great and emotional story! I was sure you could do it! ^^

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bm_shipper November 6 2010, 23:21:05 UTC
Thank you so much =D I'M glad you like what I did =D

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huntress69 November 7 2010, 02:00:54 UTC
Oh gee whiz! This was totally beautiful and it's one of those fics that just made my night!! Thanks so very very much for writing it.

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bm_shipper November 7 2010, 11:30:29 UTC
Thank you sooooooooooo much :) That really means a lot to me saying that =D

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sts451 November 7 2010, 07:10:14 UTC
Yummy! Also this was a really good idea and I loved how it turned out :) Keep up the great work!

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bm_shipper November 7 2010, 11:30:41 UTC
Thank you so much for your comment =D That means a lot to me =D

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