[fic] five times and one

[bluewalk]

Title: Five Times Someone Almost Falls in Love with Sanji (And One Time Someone Does)
Rating: PG-13 to be safe, I guess
Characters/Pairings: Sanji + six poor fools (ha!)
Summary: Don’t you love when titles speak for themselves? (Can you tell I really love this kid?)
Word Count: 4898

Comments

[kitsch_brigade]

I REALLY LIKED THIS. LIKE, A VERY MUCH LOT. I will be adding it to my memories. I have appreciated all the super spot on characterization and the end made me happy :3

[bluewalk]

Thank you so much!! I am incredibly flattered that this made its humble way to your Memories. It means a lot! &hearts

[salmon_pink]

Oh, that was just so ... so fucking pretty! Which as a word really shouldn't fit the themes of this piece, but does because damn your language is so, well, pretty. I loved this, the tease of it, the taste of everyone's mind. The way Sanji is different to everyone and still completely himself in every moment. Incredibly well-written, thank you so much for sharing.

[bluewalk]

I-If by "pretty" you actually mean "rambling and noncommittal", then... yes! >_>

But thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed it! Writing it, I kept asking myself, what how is anyone not in love with Sanji, and it was kind of difficult, haha. Thank you thank you thank you &hearts

[purplekitte]

Every one of those was so darn nice. This fic just pulled me in from the first to the last word.

[bluewalk]

Thank you so much! That is really kind of you to say, and I'm super happy it kept you to the end. &hearts

[kaeries]

This is pure GENIUS! *O*

I loved the characterization and specially the way you write. They were all wonderful, but Luffy's last line was definitely my favourite x)

I also loved that the only part with dialogue was Zoro's one, just because it shows that any kind of introspection is kinda difficult to come across when we're talking about them. They need to have action :)

And the end...I loved it :D

*added to memories*

[bluewalk]

NO, your ICON is pure genius! &hearts!!

Thank you so much! I am glad you can find joy in Luffy's emotional trauma. XD

You're right, Zoro and Sanji are MEN OF ACTION. HEROES SPEAK THROUGH THEIR DEEDS. WORDS ARE FOR THE COMMON FOLK. YOU HAVE SOMETHING TO TELL ME, SAY IT WITH YOUR FISTS. ROAR TESTOSTEROOOOOONE!

Ahem.

Thank you!! &hearts

[kaeries]

It *is* genius, indeed. A shame is not MY genius though x)I picked it up somewhere I don't remember :P

[If the person who made the icon happens to come across this, tell me who you are and I'll give due credit :3]

And YES! Hurray for testosterone. I wouldn't have them any other way ^O^

[dark_kaomi]

This was gorgeous. I'll reiterate what everyone before me has said: the characterization is more than just spot on you've made everyone feel real, tangible. Like I actually know them. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. I was so happy when I saw you had written more.

[bluewalk]

I wish I could adequately express how much I appreciate your comments. They are really, very precious to me, and I can't thank you enough. This just made the hell of finals week and insomnia much, much more bearable. Thanks a thousand &hearts