[fic] five times and one
Title: Five Times Someone Almost Falls in Love with Sanji (And One Time Someone Does)
Rating: PG-13 to be safe, I guess
Characters/Pairings: Sanji + six poor fools (ha!)
Summary: Don’t you love when titles speak for themselves? (Can you tell I really love this kid?)
Word Count: 4898
( your boy is like a memory / some sense of touch and a melody )
Rating: PG-13 to be safe, I guess
Characters/Pairings: Sanji + six poor fools (ha!)
Summary: Don’t you love when titles speak for themselves? (Can you tell I really love this kid?)
Word Count: 4898
( your boy is like a memory / some sense of touch and a melody )
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Thanks for sharing :)
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Oh, actually, the first one is supposed to be Carne/Patty/the rest of the Baratie except for Zeff/I couldn't decide/everyone just wants a piece of jailbait Sanji-- I MEAN, WHAT. >_> But I understand how it can be confusing because I was all over the place with the narrative POV for that one. I was trying for something and I wasn't sure if I achieved it or not... haha. So, I'm sorry for that ;;;
But thank you so much for reading and commenting &hearts
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Beautiful work! <3
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MISSION: ACCOMPLISHED. YEAH BABY. *pumps fist in air*
I-I mean... Thank you so much! I am so glad you are enjoying my stuff so far. It's really validating and encouraging to hear XD Yes, thank you!! &hearts
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You do really love the guy, huh? 'Cause every line, every word of this fic oozes LOVE and LOOK HOW BEAUTIFUL HE IS. You positively admire him in this story, do you? Because you made me admire him, too.
Because Sanji really can be naive and funny and moronic and elegant and gracefully deadly and a Professional and a Gentleman and a Warrior and a Son and a Friend. One moment he's cute, the next moment he's dashing, and suddenly he's beautifully dangerous AND YOU'VE SHOWN ALL OF THAT and that mention of his sharp elbows made my heart melt and boil.
You can write something like that only if you truly love the character. You managed to deliver your feelings perfectly and make your readers share them. I've read this last night and thought, 'This might very well be one of the best fics I've read in my life', and here I am, rambling incoherently. Anyway... thank you. *cries happy tears*
> Writing it, I kept asking myself, what how is anyone not in love with Sanji
Bahaha, I wonder the same thing, only about Luffy XD
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I know I just copy-pasted half your comment back to you, but it was so perfect that I had to. That is exactly why I love this kid so much, and it really means a lot that you felt all of that in the fic, because oh-- that is so validating and it makes me feel so-- happy. I am so happy :D
Thank you so much for all the wonderful comments you've left me. I really appreciate them more than feeble words can express. &hearts&hearts
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Spot on characterization. Beautiful words strung together at a good pace. GUUUUUHHHH. ;AAA;
Just have to say how many times I read the Zosan part over and over and over and over and over again. ;AAA; #zosanship
This fic is BEAUTIFUL. #NOSEBLEEDWORTHY
I love you. ♥
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Guh, but THANK YOU. This fic is kind of embarrassing because it's 100% unapologetic, unadulterated Sanji fangirling, but hey! I regret nothing.
I do like Zoro and Sanji together, but I haven't quite made the leap from Zoro&Sanji to Zoro/Sanji... as you can tell here. I think I prefer them as bros... occasionally with benefits? Still working that one out XD
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. You and your words-- you are entirely too kind ♥
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It's totally okay to just shamelessly spaz over your favorite character! Totally okay. xD There are no room for regrets when you're spazzing over a character anyway. HAHAHA.
Even if you don't romantically ship Zosan together, you still write them perfectly though.
I'm sorry I've been showering you with compliment after compliment. You might get tired of me especially once I read your other fics. LOL;;; But I write every comment with all my heart. So. ♥ /huuugs
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