I loved the line breaks, the colors used for spoken words, the cute zoo animals, and expressions/emoticons sprinkled throughout!! OMG I wanna huggle-squish you through the monitor right now!
But, really, it was a very cute, fluffy piece and I loved the little endearing moment with Sakura and Kakashi at the end. Nicely done Clear!! ♥♥♥
Lol lol lol. That Zombie Outbreak article was very informative. And reassuring! It's nice to know that zombies wouldn't be able to take over so easily. Very giggle worthy indeed.
Alas! Your account has been temporarily deactivated. But distance only makes the heart grow fonder, and I still love you very much. Thank you for reading and commenting. <3
This made me laugh. I certainly needed a good laugh today ^_^. The emoticons and colors made this so creative and wonderful.
I loved their small moment in the end. Strangely enough it makes me think of this white tiger plushie I had when I was little. Was one of my favorite things. ^^
Squee!! You are brilliant and I love reading what you write. This is so clever, with the "typical" colors for everyone talking and "drawing" the animals. The characterizations were spot-on -- I could imagine this as an anime episode! (I want to SEE this as an anime episode!) And I love the KakaSaku bits here -- fluffy and warm. (but my favorite had to be the rhino and trampling everything... and Sakura's response...)
Laurinha, it's been so long. I swear my heart skipped a beat when your message appeared in my inbox.
I'm beyond ecstatic the colors and text-animals worked out. I had concerns when typing this up, and wondered if colors would make the reading difficult, or if the text-animals would get out of whack based on different computer screens. So it's definitely a relief to hear of no struggles so far.
If they have to make fillers, they might as well make things that would please a very, um, specific and peculiar target audience. With an episode of team seven at the zoo, my life would be complete. Especially if the KakaSaku fluffy bits were there too at the end. Is that too much to ask for? What person should I contact to submit my request? Colorful emoticons might be included in the letter to sweeten up the persuasion.
Being back here and exchanging comments again feels like homecoming, and that's the truth!
This particular plot bunny has been on my mind for a long while. The plan was always simple: Kakashi abandons them at the zoo. Sakura finds him later with the tiger. She then realizes he's like that tiger. Sympathy and little heart-to-heart ensues.
But for the life of me I couldn't get it down. It was driving me crazy. The writing was too stiff. Too fragmented, with scenes scattered everywhere. Turns out, all I needed all this time, was just the help of some more colors and emoticons to get it across. Sometimes when things get too serious, it's best to just lighten up.
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I loved the line breaks, the colors used for spoken words, the cute zoo animals, and expressions/emoticons sprinkled throughout!! OMG I wanna huggle-squish you through the monitor right now!
But, really, it was a very cute, fluffy piece and I loved the little endearing moment with Sakura and Kakashi at the end. Nicely done Clear!! ♥♥♥
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I will gladly take that huggle-squish any day. ♥
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I loved their small moment in the end. Strangely enough it makes me think of this white tiger plushie I had when I was little. Was one of my favorite things. ^^
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It sounds like you would have been right there too, gazing at the tiger with Sakura and Kakashi. ♥
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I'm beyond ecstatic the colors and text-animals worked out. I had concerns when typing this up, and wondered if colors would make the reading difficult, or if the text-animals would get out of whack based on different computer screens. So it's definitely a relief to hear of no struggles so far.
If they have to make fillers, they might as well make things that would please a very, um, specific and peculiar target audience. With an episode of team seven at the zoo, my life would be complete. Especially if the KakaSaku fluffy bits were there too at the end. Is that too much to ask for? What person should I contact to submit my request? Colorful emoticons might be included in the letter to sweeten up the persuasion.
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Thanks for reading, Laurinha!
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Also... I'm so very happy to see you've got computer/internet access again. I missed you so much.
*hugs*
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This particular plot bunny has been on my mind for a long while. The plan was always simple: Kakashi abandons them at the zoo. Sakura finds him later with the tiger. She then realizes he's like that tiger. Sympathy and little heart-to-heart ensues.
But for the life of me I couldn't get it down. It was driving me crazy. The writing was too stiff. Too fragmented, with scenes scattered everywhere. Turns out, all I needed all this time, was just the help of some more colors and emoticons to get it across. Sometimes when things get too serious, it's best to just lighten up.
Thanks for reading, Rei. ♥
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