Burn Out

[bluerising]

Title: Burn Out
Word Count: Roughly 1,600
Rating: RATED T FOR SOME INTENSE HAND HOLDING.

Description: Sakura reaches burnout. Also, Kakashi is there. In this particular story he does not have burnout problems. Unless you think he should take responsibility for Sakura's problems. In which case then yes, he also has burnout problems. So then they both

Comments

[serenitytouched]

You sold me at intense hand holding. =p

Descriptions were very beautiful. I personally love dreamy kind of celestial words/atmosphere. Just always makes me feel mooshy in a good way. ^_^

Well done!

[bluerising]

Yes, we didn't want to push the boundaries TOO MUCH. So intense hand holding is as extreme as it gets. XD

Thanks for reading and commenting, Serenity. The mooshy feelings sound just about perfect. And oh my goodness, your Kakashi icon has a christmas bow on it. <3

[serenitytouched]

Hehe. Np!

My secret fantasy was a naked Kakashi with a bow on top as a Christmas present and that is exactly what I did. ^_-

[bluerising]

lololol. That's a wonderful present.

The very best Christmas gift! And best of all, it's a fantasy the rest of us can share. :P

[chocoearly]

Wow.... That's a fine way to write! I love the descriptions and the many metaphors and similes!

Actually, the plot was not that long at all but I am glad you dragged it out to pinpoint on all those lovely details.

That was a pleasure to read bluerising! <3

[bluerising]

The fact that you enjoyed the story puts a big, goofy smile on my face. But now that you pointed it out, I want to try writing something without any metaphors and similes. It sounds like challenge and sparks the imagination, don't you think?

Thanks for reading and commenting, Choco. It really means a lot. And believe me when I say the pleasure is all mine. <3

[chocoearly]

Your big goofy smile makes me smile goofily (yes, it is a word) as well.

Ooo I love challenges, especially if you're trying to conquer a habit or something. It's thrilling :D Spark that imagination, Blue!!

[bluerising]

Thanks, Choco! Challenges are definitely good for conquering habits.

I'm writing another little ficcie right now, and feel hyper-conscious about keeping out the metaphors and similes. I also wrote all of the dialogue first in an effort to cut down the descriptive passages. Not that description, metaphors, and similes are bad things. Not at all! But it's good to stretch out those writing muscles in a different direction.

[denilmo]

CLEAR!!

*glomps*

I'm so happy to see that you posted - and a wonderful bit of fic at that.
The hand-holding, the metaphors... the way you painted the scenery. I could envision the campfire and the starry sky, and the two ninja off to the side with their bodies secretly communicating - the silent questions, the heaviness and the lift. You seriously know how to make a Deni squee.

I really love the way you write. ♥♥

[bluerising]

Deni, deni, deni, deni... <3