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blueplue_hotaru

That Name

Jun 02, 2010 01:05

Title: That Name
Pairing: YunJae, JaeMin
Genre: Angst, Drama
Rating: Pg-13
Length: Three-shots(3/3) I (Part 1: His Name) I (Part 2: My Name)
A/N: Fic exchange with lophe (who wrote Part 2)

Summary: Finally he chanted that name.

( And you breathed. You took another breath. Heavy, too fast, too slow, and you felt it didn’t matter anymore. )

genre:drama, genre:angst, pairing:yunjae, pairing:jaemin, type:fanfic, length:threeshot, author:blueplue_hotaru, rating:pg-13

Comments 25

blueplue_hotaru June 1 2010, 17:05:58 UTC

spot! for lophe!
^^

lophe June 1 2010, 19:34:17 UTC

the first word that came from my mouth when i finished reading this was : “wow!!”
this is totally angst but i love it very much! <33
you’re amazing like ususal, bb… *applause*

You’re more than a moment too late
what a perfect line for the ending!!

:)

in the end yunho decide to leave jaejoong…
but at the same time.. jaejoong loves yunho..
truthfully, i thought jaejoong really deserve it, right? >.<
and in the end both of them got their lesson…
love should not be forced and don’t left it unsaid…

*sob*
and pray for both of them can move on and have a better life… ^^

you made a great perfect angst, bb…!!

*hugs*

<33

blueplue_hotaru June 1 2010, 19:52:57 UTC

kkk...^^
*blushed*
thanks, bb!
we made it together, remember?
so let's cheer for ourselves together!
kya~!!!
^^

yeah, i did touch-up a little since i thought the whole story seemed off somehow before.
~_~
and yeah, i totally agree with you, love can't be forced and shouldn't be left unsaid.

yup, let's pray for them...
kkk....^^

*hugs you back*
so let's go on with yours one.
^^

fighting2!

p/s: thanks, bb!
this is a one memorable fic for me and us.^^

lophe June 1 2010, 20:05:11 UTC

ohh yeaah... *cheers*
^_^
kyaaa... i'm so happy too.. this is my first time trying fic exchange.. *grin*
thanks a lot bb, for doing this with me.. ^^

and oooh.. the touched up is really great.. you really know how to do the best, bb... ^__^
<33

*hug you very tight*

and of course this is be one memorable fic for me too.. :)

blueplue_hotaru June 1 2010, 17:06:27 UTC

spot!
for heeartquake!

blueplue_hotaru June 1 2010, 17:07:39 UTC

spot!
for yozora_yume!
^^

yozora_yume June 1 2010, 17:35:38 UTC

kyaaa!!! i got a spot!!!XD i love it...though angst??? TT.TT let me cry first...

blueplue_hotaru June 1 2010, 18:04:01 UTC

^^
yup!

yeah...me and lophe thought sad ending fitted better with this fic.

not every love has a happy ending and this is one of the example.

~_~

and oh, here some tissues!
cry your heart out if you want.
*huggles*

but!
your 'devil' fic will be going to have a happy ending right?
haha of course....
i shouldn't be worry about it....right?
~_~

p/s: thanks for reading and commenting, dear!!!
^^

yozora_yume June 1 2010, 19:47:44 UTC

correct correct~and yes, nothing to worry about that fic. it's going to be happy happy fic all the way~ but the fic im planning on starting along with my boss is a devil is quite angst? kkkk anyway, this was a great fic, short but enough said.^^

Thread 5

blueplue_hotaru June 1 2010, 17:08:29 UTC

spot!
for keshbluedolph!
^^

wong_java4 June 1 2010, 23:08:34 UTC

*sobs* You're killing me bb *sobs*
You wrote this final part so well I feel my heart ached as if I was the one who experienced all those angsty feelings. I want YunHo back, please bring him back to Jae I beg you *cries*

blueplue_hotaru June 2 2010, 04:52:35 UTC

T___T
hey...don't cry....
ok, let me cry with you.

oh, thanks a lot, dear!
although you felt your ached because of this...
T__T

but...
idk, dear...if i should make them together...
~_~

ok, let's do this.
if there's aome readers who want the same as you maybe i'll write another part, and if my friend lophe thinks it's a good idea too.
but maybe neh?