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bluemonkiesx

never planned and never perfect

Oct 19, 2009 19:33

Title: Never Planned and Never Perfect
Author: bluemonkiesx

Pairing: Jiyong/Seungri

Genre: general.

Length: short drabble

Theme: #11 Kiss

Author's Note: 4/30. This is a birthday fic for krizza<3 aka,
oxygenlove ~ ILOVEYOU, MEOW. and gah! I’m so sorry sorry sorry this is a week late. college coaches hate me >.>

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!drabble, p: jiyong/seungri, !challenge

Comments 59

bluemonkiesx October 20 2009, 02:37:57 UTC

spot~ for krizza<333333

oxygenlove October 20 2009, 21:34:49 UTC

ZOMG I'M SUPPOSED TO BE WRITING MY CRITIQUE FOR VIKTOR FRANKL BUT BUT BUTTTTT!!!!!!!

bluemonkiesx October 21 2009, 03:57:54 UTC

ZOMG. you can go finish your critique for viktor frankl now?
LOL.

oxygenlove October 20 2009, 21:53:01 UTC

I don't know where you've been, how you've been doing and I missed you so, and I've been busy myself, HOWEVER, the times I haven't seen you around are good for THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME.

Your best yet.

DAMN.

I just don't know what to say, it has matured a lot, the way you write has really become more descriptive, not cluttered and very expressive.

The mood isn't really light, not really fluffy, not really- but it feels so sweet and... nice.

I'm memming this <3

AND THANK YOUUUUUUUUU~ A fic for me is the only gift I ever wanted for my birthday and you gave it :)

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daesung_fanatic October 20 2009, 02:46:49 UTC

OMG THAT WAS AWESOME!

and SOOO CUTE...I want my first kiss to be like that <333333

bluemonkiesx October 20 2009, 04:51:02 UTC

THANK YOUUUUUU<3

and omg. I wish my first kiss was like that.
D:
ROFLROFLROFL.

haelin October 20 2009, 03:21:44 UTC

SPOT FOR ME ME ME! THIS WILL BE AN EARLY GIFT FOR ME THEN... HAHAHAHHA! Me loves you LINDAAAAAAA!

bluemonkiesx October 20 2009, 03:26:33 UTC

YES. SPOT FOR YOU, UNNIE.
BECAUSE I LOVE YOU AND THIS IS ALSO A SUPER SECRET EARLY PRESENT FOR YOU.
*huggles*

haelin October 20 2009, 03:32:00 UTC

OH MY EFF... GAH! Krizza's so lucky to have this fic dedicated to her...

You made me realize things about kisses... LINDA, YOU! Gah!

I like how you wrote this... I like that there's imperfection in kissing..

And the ending part!! I LIKE IT SO MUCH!

*huggles you oh so tight!*

bluemonkiesx October 20 2009, 04:50:09 UTC

BUT IT IS SECRETLY DEDICATED TO YOU TOO.
or I'll probably just write you your own fic later.
XD

OMG. WHAT'D YOU REALIZE?!

awww, it took me forever to get it write. i kept deleting and rewriting parts >.>

BUT I LOVE THE ENDING. THAT CAME OUT RIGHT THE FIRST TIME<333

*dances*

hiroyukishinji October 20 2009, 03:35:22 UTC

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW its just so cute and fluffy that im totally smiling like an idiot. How seungri is kissed unexpectedly all the time and this time he does to my Jiyongie. Its just freaking adorable.

ps. this is totally full of win <3

bluemonkiesx October 20 2009, 04:53:11 UTC

CUTE AND FLUFFY GRI~
damn, i need to write some angsty gri. LOL.

wah! i love making people smile like idiots :)

ps. you are full of win for saying that<3

aishiteru_amie October 20 2009, 03:53:30 UTC

that is so sweet.
now i want someone to kiss me like that.
hehehe~
ji is lucky so does ri.
keep kissing each other dorks!
hehehehe!
thanks for this lovely fic!!

bluemonkiesx October 20 2009, 04:53:51 UTC

aw, thank youu<3

and omg! i want someone to kiss me like that too. aish.