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bluemonkiesx

never planned and never perfect

Oct 19, 2009 19:33

Title: Never Planned and Never Perfect
Author: bluemonkiesx

Pairing: Jiyong/Seungri

Genre: general.

Length: short drabble

Theme: #11 Kiss

Author's Note: 4/30. This is a birthday fic for krizza<3 aka,
oxygenlove ~ ILOVEYOU, MEOW. and gah! I’m so sorry sorry sorry this is a week late. college coaches hate me >.>

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!drabble, p: jiyong/seungri, !challenge

Comments 59

minamelody October 20 2009, 04:01:18 UTC

:)
that was so nice

i was getting the same tingly anticipating feeling while ji was tensing up

i love your writing. thanks so much for sharing :)

bluemonkiesx October 20 2009, 04:48:26 UTC

aw, thank you!
<3333333

and wah. I get a tingly feeling when people tell me they love my writing. it always makes me smile<333333

AND YOUR ICON IS LOVE ♥

kellygreen October 20 2009, 04:56:35 UTC

Oh my god, I loved this! SO cute and romantic. Seungri, you little tease...I want to be kissed like that~!

bluemonkiesx October 20 2009, 05:30:02 UTC

wah! thank you.
and yes seungri is such a tease<333

tees2mai October 20 2009, 05:49:19 UTC

aww that was so cute. I love fluffly GRi, there isn't enough of it, there's too much angst surrounding these two. I love that Jiyong was submissive to Seungri in the end, I love it when Seungri has the upper hand

I wish that was how I had my first kiss :)

this was lovely ♥

bluemonkiesx October 21 2009, 04:18:52 UTC

WAH. apparently, I am good at writing fluffy GRI.
so, whenever you want some just ask me? LOL.
even tho I've been meaning to write some angsty gri for a while now.

but nyah! submissive! jiyong and aggressive! seungri <3333

and omg. I wish my first kiss was like that too.
*sigh

ninja_starshine October 20 2009, 06:46:07 UTC

squeeeeeeee this makes me want to keyboard smash and squish something.

i like intimate, soft GRI kissing oh yes i do, the more imperfect the sweeter! so le sigh~ to this ♥ i swear they turn me into mush everytime.

bluemonkiesx October 21 2009, 06:08:37 UTC

*squeals* that's the reaction I wanted readers to have. LOL.

and nyah! intimate GRI does that to a lot of people, I bet. turn them into mush and what not.
<3333333

that icon never fails to make me giggle.

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bluemonkiesx October 21 2009, 06:17:44 UTC

omfg.
WE CAN GO TO VEGAS AND GET MARRIED?!
roflroflrofl.

and eeek! you memmed it?! *squishes* you're too sweet<3333333

and eeek x2! thank you thank you thank you thank you. i'm so glad you liked it 8D