Comments | bluejbird: Fic: How late they start to shine (Steve/Thor, R) Part Two

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Fic: How late they start to shine (Steve/Thor, R) Part Two

Dec 19, 2012 21:41

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aerowyn December 20 2012, 06:41:08 UTC

This was so good! I loved the slow build of their relationship, the way each member of the team interacted with both Steve and Thor, the way they all knew without Steve telling them. I also think you got Thor's voice perfect! There are a lot of people who end up making him a bit farcical, but you did a wonderful job of keeping his boisterousness while still making him sweet, intelligent, gentle, and bad ass.

I loved it! Great job :p

bluejbird December 21 2012, 01:46:25 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm really pleased you thought Thor's voice was okay, since I was a bit worried about that. I'm relieved to know it came across okay!

Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

llaras December 20 2012, 09:47:32 UTC

This is the first fic I have read of this pairing and it is excellent! It will now be the measurement for all others to come!

bluejbird December 21 2012, 01:46:59 UTC

Aww, thanks! I'm really pleased you enjoyed it.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

masteroftrouble December 20 2012, 16:59:49 UTC

While I normally ship them aaaaaaall, Steve and Thor are two that I don't ship mainly. And they're slowly creeping up the list because of fics like this. LOVE THIS.

bluejbird December 21 2012, 01:47:39 UTC

I'm really glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

thepsychicclam December 22 2012, 04:14:24 UTC

OMG. I LOVE YOU. like, so much. this was so perfect in so many ways. it's exactly what i wanted and MORE ( ... )

bluejbird December 23 2012, 20:40:54 UTC

I am beyond pleased that you liked it! Absolutely no need to apologise at all :) I'm really glad you liked all the things you mentioned (also, a PhD in anglo-saxon lit sounds super awesome and interesting!) because I really enjoyed writing it. So thank you for such great prompts, they were really inspiring!

Happy holidays!

brushed_velvet December 22 2012, 21:54:32 UTC

*squees*

I have such an undying love for this pairing and this fic is exquisite!

I adore the quiet, tender quality of their relationship and the voices feel so spot on.

I hope you'll be inspired to write more Steve/Thor?

bluejbird December 23 2012, 20:42:06 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

I was really lucky to get great prompts for a pairing that is my OTP. Hopefully I'll be inspired to write some more, as I love Steve/Thor together so much!

Thank you for reading and commenting!