Fic: Such a Sweet Surprise (Puck/Finn)

[bluejbird]

Because today is my birthday, and I am officially old (love and life has passed me by, according to the video at the Jane Austen centre in Bath we went to last week :) ), I come bearing this.

Title: Such a Sweet Surprise
Pairing: Puck/Finn
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~2100
Warnings: Rimming
Summary: Puck knows that the problem isn’t that he’s too

Comments

[brad4815]

Loved it!

There's a surprising lack of rimming in porn in this fandom, but you did a great job with it!

"Puck is seriously considering that whole ‘shoving a lump of coal up there and getting a diamond in a week’ thing he heard about in some movie. He could do with the cash, especially if he’s not going to get laid."
I lol'd

Also, I liked your subtle inclusion of Finn/Food.

And happy birthday!!

[bluejbird]

I'm so pleased you liked it! Thank you so much for reading.

As much as I ship Puck/Finn pretty hardcore, I cannot deny that Finn/Food is canon endgame, thus its inevitable inclusion in my fic. ;)

Also, thank you so much!

[nimuu]

I never normally read this pairing because I worry the pairing ruins the characters, but you made it work completely. They're still the same silly boys, while being totally hilarious and adorable. Also, hot. <3 And happy birthday!

[bluejbird]

Thank you for giving this a try, despite not normally reading this pairing. I'm so pleased you liked it anyway! And I'm glad you found it hot!

Thank you for reading, and thanks for the birthday wishes! :)

[fandom_gal]

Happy birthday! This is awesome! You have the birthday and we get the present :)

Like always, you just bowl me over with your fantastic Puck and Finn characterizations. I love them trying to have sex, running into difficulties and Puck figuring put to make it work. I also love the idea of Puck mentally admitting to wanting to be on the receiving end in the future too. It feels like a continuation of your other stories...where they just progress further and further along with their "not" relationship. So good.

Hope there is more to come with these two soon!

[bluejbird]

Thank you! :D

I'm so pleased you liked the characterisations in this, and that you thought it felt like a continuation, since that was vaguely what I was going for. And lol, Puck definitely wants to be on the receiving end, if only he can admit it out loud! :)

Thank you for your lovely comment, and thank you for reading! There will hopefully be more soon indeed!

[becca_radcgg]

YOU ARE NOT OLD! And we name twins really need to stick together.

I loved this. It was dirty and friendly and insistent and wonderful.

You do write awesome beyond awesome puck/finn fics.

I hope that there is cake and excellent work!

[bluejbird]

Name twins do need to stick together! You're right! \o/ The old thing comes from my BFF (who is, incidentally, also a name twin) and I hearing that, after 27, love and life has passed you by, so I must really be screwed now. It's become a silly joke between us that I can't help but share at every possible occasion, even though mentally I shall forever be twelve. Uh, tl;dr, sorry!

Anyways. Thank you so much for your lovely comment! I'm really pleased you liked the fic. Thank you for reading! :D

[madmenfanatic]

wow, this is the first honest fic about anal sex/foreplay that I've read. (Yes, Puck, it is too foreplay.) The potential grossness, like he didn't want to stick his tongue in too far because he might taste the "filling". No one ever washes their hands, and in threesome fics I've even read where Puck/Finn have unprotected sex, then Puck immediately "does" Rachel. Great way to give a girl an infection, guys. But I try to remember this is FICTION. And then you wrote this great piece. I loved the kiss at the end. And I can see the boys sipping cherry slushies at school and iing each other secret smiles...

[bluejbird]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the fic and thought it was honest about the sex. I used to gloss over the 'grosser' side of sex in fic but I've become fond of the realness, particularly between characters who don't think of the world as rainbows and butterflies, like Puck. So I'm glad that came across okay to you!

I like to think that the buying of a cherry slushie/Icee/whatever will become a sort of batsignal to the recipient that the other boy wants to get down and dirty with him and the earliest convenience or something. ;)